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1Trainable spells of the water dragon.  Empty Trainable spells of the water dragon. Mon Jun 16, 2014 7:47 pm

Lucy Striker

Lucy Striker
To be trained:



Last edited by Lucy Striker on Wed Jun 18, 2014 2:02 pm; edited 3 times in total

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine
Take out the spells that require jewels since you do not have the jewels required to purchase them yet.

Water Dragon Jet:
Add a sustain cost.

Cooldown, "Duration +1"

Water Dragon Slash:
Duration would be instant.

Cooldown needs to be above the duration.

Water Dragon Spiralling Heat Fist:
Duration would be instant.
Take the, "[Per fist]" part, completely.
Bump cooldown to 3 posts.

Water Dragon Spiralling Jet:
Duration would be instant.

State that the user cannot be knocked out of the range of 10 meters.

Lucy Striker

Lucy Striker
Edited ^^ i believe

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine
Water Dragon Jet:

The sustain cost would have went in the Magic Cost section, but since this spell only lasts for one post there wouldn't be anything to sustain, so take that part out. I must have read the duration wrong before. Sorry about that. Also, bump the cooldown to 3.

Water Dragon Spiralling Heat Fist:

Take out the, "[Per fist]" portion completely. Also, bump the cooldown to 4 posts.

Water Dragon Spiralling Jet:

Bump cooldown to 4.

Lucy Striker

Lucy Striker
Edited.

May i just ask originally you bumped those two moves up from two post cooldown to 3.....why is it now four? Don't you think four posts for a C-rank is a little much?

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine
No, it's not. It's relatively average actually. I felt I was being a little too lenient with your spells, cooldown wise. Thus, I asked you to bump the cooldown. Anyways, you forgot to bump the cooldown on Water Dragon Jet and you're good to go.

Lucy Striker

Lucy Striker
Oh sorry i thought i had changed it. 3 post cool down for a single use. Your robbing me :3

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine
Approved, link back when finished. haha xD

Lucy Striker

Lucy Striker
1 Spell Trained

http://www.natsudragneel.com/t2232-training-my-spell#12687


Name: Water Dragon Spiralling Heat Fist
Rank: C-rank
Magic Cost: 20Mp
Requirements: Water Dragon Slayer
Class: Offensive
Element: Water
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 posts
Effect: The Water Dragon slayer covers there fist in water that is constantly spiralling and  that is heated to temperatures easily capable of melting Ice. This also enhances the strength of the punch and leaves a spiralling trail behind it that is 10 meters long and four meters thick. Anyone caught can be inflicted with minor burn damage. Naturally the wielder is immune to this due to it being created from her magic.

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