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1Zen's started spells Empty Zen's started spells Sat Jun 07, 2014 10:44 am

Zen Serath

Zen Serath
Name: Fire Arrow
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 MP
Requirements: Fire Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Fire
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 3 Post
Effect: User creates a small arrow of fire which will explode on impact, the arrow fires from the center of his hand, the explosion is strong enough to create deep bruises, it has a 10 meter range and can be blocked by a D ranked shield or technique.

Name: Blood Boiler
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 mp. 5 mp sustained.
Requirements: Fire Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Fire
Duration: 2 Posts
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Effect: Will make anyone in a 4 meter radius around the user sweat, this can cause dehydration.

Name: Burning Shield
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 MP
Requirements: Fire Magic
Class: Defensive
Element: Fire
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Effect: Creates a shield of fire in front of the caster to protect against two D ranked attack and a single C ranked attack, the size of the shield is 1 meter in diameter.

Name: Fire Walker
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 mp. 5 mp sustained.
Requirements: Fire Magic
Class: Supplementary
Element: Fire
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Effect: Will coat casters feet in fire, allowing them to move 25% faster then normal, the fire has no other effects.

Name: Overheat
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 MP
Requirements: Fire Magic
Class: Defensive
Element: Fire
Duration: 2 Posts
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Effect: Will coat users whole body in fire, this will protect him from 15% damage from a direct hit, it will also cause the area around him to heat up, this can cause people standing close to sweat more.



Last edited by Zen Serath on Sat Jun 07, 2014 4:07 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Zen's started spells Empty Re: Zen's started spells Sat Jun 07, 2014 12:40 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Fire Arrow:
- Raise the MP needed to 10MP.
- Raise cooldown to 2 posts.

Blood Boiler:
There is some uncertainty with a spell like this. The temperature of the human body normally is 37 degrees centigrade. To even increase this by a single degree is considered a heavy fever for a child. I'll accept the spell on the basis that it can't do anymore than cause sweating, and possibly dehydration.

- I don't like telling people to change their spells, but you could make it so that anyone who comes within a certain distance (3 meters, 4 meters, etc) will end up sweating, getting dehydrated, etc. If you decide to go with my suggestion, give your spell a sustain of 5MP. If you want to keep it the way you have it now, put in 'physical contact', not just contact.

Burning Shield:
- State how big the shield is.
- Increase MP needed to 10MP.
- A D-Rank shield could block against 2 D-Rank spells and a single C-Rank spell.

Fire Walker:
- A D-Rank spell for a non buffing magic only buffs you by 25%. Change this.
- Give it an actual duration.

Overheat:
- Approved.

By he way, for your starter spells, you can have 1C and 4D. You have 5D. Bump when edited.

3Zen's started spells Empty Re: Zen's started spells Sat Jun 07, 2014 1:07 pm

Zen Serath

Zen Serath
Bump.

4Zen's started spells Empty Re: Zen's started spells Sat Jun 07, 2014 3:58 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Increase Fire Arrow's cooldown to 3 posts and we're good to go.

5Zen's started spells Empty Re: Zen's started spells Sat Jun 07, 2014 4:08 pm

Zen Serath

Zen Serath
Bump.

6Zen's started spells Empty Re: Zen's started spells Sat Jun 07, 2014 4:13 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Approved. Your spells have been added to your profile.

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