Yasu Ren wrote:Name: Summon: Skeleton <--- Ok!
Rank: D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost: 10 MP <--- Ok!
Requirements: Undead Magic <--- Ok!
Class: Offensive <--- Ok!
Element: Non-elemental(Questionable?) <--- Ok!
Cooldown: 3 post <--- Ok!
Duration: Until destroyed or dismissed <--- Ok!
Effect: Summon undead Skeleton with bone weapons(melee:blunt) <--- It should read like this: This spell summons a thrall of undead magic, it takes the form of a skeleton which uses blunt weaponry made of bone marrow.


Name: Berserking <--- Ok!
Rank: D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost: 5 MP <--- Ok!
Requirements: Undead Magic <--- Ok!
Class: Buff <--- Supplementary!
Element: Non-elemental(Questionable?) <--- Ok!
Cooldown: 3 post <--- Ok!
Duration: 2 post <--- Ok!
Effect: Adds a cutting effect to weapons(Claws, club, etc) and chance of double strike. <--- That is not a property of necromancy. This spell does not follow the overall theme of your magic. Please change it.


Name: Withering <--- Ok!
Rank: D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost: 10 MP <--- Ok!
Requirements: Undead Magic <--- Ok!
Class: Debuff <--- Supplementary.
Element: Non-elemental(Questionable?) <--- Ok!
Cooldown: 3 post <--- Ok!
Duration: 2 post <--- Ok!
Effect: Slows opponent(s) down by 5% within 5 meter area. <--- How. There needs to be more information on what this looks like, and what this actually does. How it does it. Why it does it. Who does it. When does it. But not what does it. Seriously though, more detail.


Name: Summon: Vulcan <--- Ok!
Rank: D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost: 10 MP <--- Ok!
Requirements: Undead Magic <--- Ok!
Class: Supplementary <--- Ok!
Element: Non-elemental(Questionable?) <--- Ok!
Cooldown: 3 post <--- Ok!
Duration: Until destroyed or dismissed <--- Ok!
Effect: Summons a Undead Vulcan <--- Describe the Vulcan more. Give us an idea of how strong it is.


Name: Drain <--- Ok!
Rank: D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost: 10 MP <--- Ok!
Requirements: Undead Magic <--- Ok!
Class: Supplementary <--- Ok!
Element: Non-elemental(Questionable?) <--- Ok!
Cooldown: 4 post <--- Ok!
Duration: 1 post <--- Ok!
Effect: Drain life source of target to heal castor, drain ends when castor is healed and/or interrupted. <--- This is a unique ability of the Undead Dragon Slayer only. For this reason this spell is denied.

Yasu Ren wrote:Name: Summon: Skeleton <--- Ok!
Rank: D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost: 10 MP <--- 10 | 10
Requirements: Undead Magic <--- Ok!
Class: Offensive <--- Ok!
Element: Non-elemental <--- Ok!
Cooldown: 3 post <--- Ok!
Duration: Until destroyed or dismissed <--- Ok!
Effect: This spell summons a thrall of undead magic, it takes the form of a skeleton which uses blunt weaponry made of bone marrow <--- Haha, add that 2 D's or 1 C rank is enough to destroy the creature. As you control the creatures remotely its not like the thing can be auto-hit anyway.


Name: Berserking <--- Ok!
Rank: D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost: 5 MP <--- Needs to say 10 | 10
Requirements: Undead Magic <--- Ok!
Class: Buff <--- Ok!
Element: Non-elemental <--- Ok!
Cooldown: 3 post <--- Ok!
Duration: 2 post <--- Ok!
Effect: Causes the magic that constructs the summon to go berserk and collapse up itself, granting the summon greater strength for a short time but it will implode on itself cause minor AoE damage around itself. <--- Give a range to this AoE damage.


Name: Withering <--- Ok!
Rank: D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost: 10 MP <--- 10 | 10
Requirements: Undead Magic <--- Ok!
Class: Debuff <--- Ok!
Element: Non-elemental <--- Ok!
Cooldown: 3 post <--- Ok!
Duration: 2 post <--- Ok!
Effect: Forms a sickly green 5m dome field that causes all opponents to move slowly by 5%. The castor cannot move.<--- Dome of what? Get a bit more descriptive of how this dome accomplishes slowing down the target. Is there a gas inside the dome? Is the dome a dome of some sort of goo? Details.

Name: Summon: Vulcan <--- Summon: Undead Vulcan (You're not actually summoning a vulcan.)
Rank: D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost: 10 MP <--- 10 | 10
Requirements: Undead Magic <--- Ok!
Class: Supplementary <--- Ok!
Element: Non-elemental <--- Ok!
Cooldown: 3 post <--- Ok!
Duration: Until destroyed or dismissed <--- Ok!
Effect: Summons a Undead Vulcan, They possess gargantuan arms, and sequentially, large hands that is used to catch enemies. They also have a pointed head that resemble a single horn on top of their head in which they can use, <--- State that it can not use takeover.

Name: Drain <--- Ok!
Rank: C <--- Ok!
Magic Cost: 20 MP <--- Ok!
Requirements: Undead Magic <--- Ok!
Class: Supplementary <--- Ok!
Element: Non-elemental(Questionable?) <--- Ok!
Cooldown: 4 post <--- Ok!
Duration: 1 post <--- This is actually the duration of how long the summon takes the features of the other. So you might want to increase this.
Effect: Causes the summon to consume another, and allow the consumer gain some appearance and traits of the consumed for a short time. <--- There needs to be an indicator of how many times one of your summons can absorb another summon. Don't need you making some six arm Vulcan Ogre Dragon Lich thing.