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1Kayal Shadowlark Empty Kayal Shadowlark Wed Mar 30, 2016 11:50 pm

Kayal shadowlark


Kayal Shadowlark Kayal10

  “hide the pain behind a smile it is fake and lasts awhile.”
 

GENERAL INFORMATION

Name(s):Kayal Shadowlark
Nickname(s): kay kay
Age: 23
Gender:female
Birthday: april 16
Sexuality: straight
Rank: D
Guild: none
Tattoo: Has a black crescent moon on her back left side over her heart. Once she finds her guild she will place their mark on her right shoulder near the joint.
Face Claim: (Full name character and show it belongs to)

APPEARANCE

Height: 5'5''
Weight: 160lb
Hair: black
Eyes: silver (occasionally a blue tint if emotions are high)
Description: Kayal has long black hair that is generally a mess. She has bright sliver eyes that tend to change color when she has an emotional extreme. She has a strange sense of style ranging from tank tops or one strap tops to long sleeve bell style shirts. She always wears flared pants. Her favorite color is black so she generally wears that. She does like other colors such as red blue and purple. She usually has a small clip or ponytail in her hair the clips are generally silver to complement her eyes. She doesn’t mind having other colors. She has sharp teeth like the dragon slayers. She doesn’t wear make-up at least not much. She usually has her nails painted black and sharpened. She has a black crescent moon tattoo on her back in the middle of the left shoulder blade. She wears a bracelet that her twists up her arm. It was a gift from her parents when she began her journey to discover her powers.

PERSONALITY

Personality:Kayal is a strong willed girl. Her heart is her greatest strength. She is overly kind and never expects anything to come of it. She loves everyone she meets including the animals. She has made tons of friends with the forest creatures. She is also very stubborn. Once her mind is made up there is nothing going to stop her. With her love and stubbornness grows her protectiveness. She doesn’t really care how others see or treat her but if you threaten someone she cares about you’re a goner. The desire to protect her friends and family is her strongest quality. She is a hard working girl willing to go the extra mile for those who need her. To many she seems like a bright cheery person, always happy. However if they take the time to really look past all her masks they will see a lonely girl. Her low self-esteem and sadness is masked daily by a smile that no one can see through. She doesn’t like to bother people with her feelings, so instead she turns to fighting. She loves the thrill of a fight and can never turn down a good battle. She also loves to create strategy plans  

Motivations:Kayal is pushes by her heart. She has always wanted to protect those around her even if they didn't know she was there.

Fears: Kayal greatest fear would be to end up all alone in this world. She is also afraid of rejection and failure. Another big fear would be watching someone she loves dying.
Likes: she likes fighting, hunting, hiking, drawing, reading, and writing.
Dislikes: she doesn't like rude behavior,  evil or seeing some one she cares for hurt (emotionally or physically)
Positive Characteristics:


  • Agile (+3): You are particularly flexible and poised.
    Explanation: You can dodge an attack up to B Rank, so long as it is feasible for you do to so (AoE excluded). Usable once per thread.

    Alertness (+4): You have finely tuned senses.
    Explanation: Passive D Rank hearing, sight, and smell buffs.

    Diehard (+2): You can remain conscious after attacks that would fell others.
    Explanation: Allows for 1 A-Rank spell to be shrugged off. Damage is still applied, but no pain is shown. Limit of once per battle.

    Diligent (+2): Your meticulousness allows you to analyze minute details that others miss.
    Explanation: Reduces training cost of spells by 10% in word cost.

   

Negative Characteristics:



  •   Clumsiness (-1): You have the unfortunate habit of dropping things, knocking things over, or tripping.
    Explanation: You are simply clumsy. You must perform an act of clumsiness in one out of five posts. In combat, you screw up an attack in one out of five posts.

    Compulsive Honesty (-2): You cannot tell a lie, nor can you behave in a deceitful fashion. You tend to be blunt rather than tactful, even if it means insulting someone who you and your companions are trying to impress.
    Explanation: You can't lie and you will tell the truth when someone asks you something instead of lying. So if your team is impressing an ogre and the ogre asks if you guys are truly from the guild you guys claimed you were and lied about it, you will screw it up and say the truth.

    Curiosity (-1): You're a naturally curious person and you find mysteries of any sort irresistible. In most circumstances, alas, your curiosity overrides your common sense. This forces you to investigate something unusual, even if it looks like it might be dangerous.
    Explanation: You will walk deeper into the forest you have never been before. You won't turn around from the castle that you have never seen. This can result into getting you into very dangerous situations.

    Daredevil (-2): You only really feel alive when you're staring death in the face. Your character is addicted to the thrill of death-defying stunts, pushing themselves to the limit at every available opportunity.
    Explanation: You can't refuse the opportunity of engaging into combat with anyone or anything that is stronger than you. You also always volunteer and perform tasks that have a risk attached to them when you are in a group.

    Intolerance (-1): You have an irrational dislike of a certain thing. It may be an animal, a class of person, a situation, or just about anything at all. Note that some dislikes may be too trivial or ridiculous to count--a dislike of Bavarian-crème-filled donuts or mechanical pencils, for example, has no real dramatic value and will not be allowed.
    Explanation: You must act very disgusted and displeased when your dislike comes into play.






Magic: Lunar Mystic
Type: Castor
Element: Moon power
Description: She holds power much like the actual moon. This should give her a gift of weather, gravity, purity, healing, and if she goes the limit it gives her the ability to control the night. As of right now she will know weather spells. She was told she received this gift being being blessed by a goddess.

History
Kayal Shadowlark was born in small village that was said to be built by that gods themselves. She was born during a drought  so the family had very little to eat. Making her mother very Malnourished. She was born tiny and ill.They were sure she wasn't going to make it. They took her to the temple to offer her to the Lunar Goddess. They prayed that the loss of their first born daughter will make the Goddess have pity on them and bless the land with water again. they lay Kayal on the alter and kissed her good bye. Her mother cried as her father drug her away. The next morning a cry was heard from the shrine. Someone came in and saw Kayal laying there crying because she was hungry. They took Kayal to her parents where she was welcomed and fed. They where all amazed when she opened her eyes. Instead of green eyes like both her parents her eyes where silver like the moon. When the baby cooed it started to rain.

As Kayal grew the town practically worshiped her. she was constantly followed and never left alone. when she turned sixteen she begged her parents to allow her to leave the village and see the world. She couldn't stand being surrounded by people but no one really knowing her. She didn't have friends no one took the time to listen to her. She finally got her parents to agree. They managed to scrounge up some money to send her on her journey. Her mother gave her a long twisted bracelet that was said to be her grandmothers. A gift to remind her of home her mother said as Kayal began her journey to find where she really belonged.

2Kayal Shadowlark Empty Re: Kayal Shadowlark Sat Apr 16, 2016 3:23 pm

Sayuno

Sayuno
Kayal Shadowlark Happy_by_sherimur-d478zal
Hi! We haven't heard from you in a while!
Please bump this application within 7 days
if you plan on finishing it or else this will be archieved.

3Kayal Shadowlark Empty Re: Kayal Shadowlark Sat Apr 16, 2016 9:06 pm

Kayal shadowlark


What am I missing?

4Kayal Shadowlark Empty Re: Kayal Shadowlark Sat Apr 16, 2016 10:08 pm

Rosencrantz

Rosencrantz
-So first off, the character template has been updated, so if you wouldn't mind grabbing the new one from the code box, that'd be fantastic.

-Tattoo is only for the guild tattoo and it's implied anyway that when you are initially guildless the area/colour you indicate is where the tattoo will be after your initiation into the guild. So, "Has a black crescent moon on her back left side over her heart" you can remove that

-Your positive and negative characteristics are uneven. You have +11 and -7. The negatives can be greater than the positives, but still have to be at least equal to the positive characteristics values.

- "Magic: Lunar Mystic
Type: Castor
Element: Moon power
Description: She holds power much like the actual moon. This should give her a gift of weather, gravity, purity, healing, and if she goes the limit it gives her the ability to control the night. As of right now she will know weather spells. She was told she received this gift being being blessed by a goddess."
Mostly because of the variety of abilities, i.e. weather control and gravity manipulation and "night control", this will not fly.
As well, "Moon power" is not a valid element at this time. Although there is not an official list of elements right now, I think some close elements to what you are getting at would be water (to make it rain), light (because moonlight?), darkness ("night control"), rock (the moon is rock), or whatever you want idk

5Kayal Shadowlark Empty Re: Kayal Shadowlark Sun May 01, 2016 6:14 am

Sayuno

Sayuno
Archived. PM me if you'd like to keep working on this.

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