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1Rain Hikari Empty Rain Hikari Wed Feb 11, 2015 1:38 am

Rain Hikari

Rain Hikari

   Rain Hikari Rain_zps83f52512
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   "Those who cower in the light, will never see the beauty of the dark"
   

Name(s): Rain Hikari
Nickname(s): The White Demon
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Birthday: August 10th X765
Sexuality: Homosexual
Class: Cleric
Alignment: Neutral Good
Rank: Level 1
Guild: Sabertooth
Guild Tattoo: Right shoulder blade, crimson
Face Claim: Rinka Urushiba, Tokyo ESP

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 5'6
Weight: 125 pounds
Hair: White, when down goes down to her shoulder blades.
Eyes: Red
General Appearance: Rain appearance gives off the impression that she is small and frail, although she does look well fit. Her white hair is about medium length although she typically keeps it in a ponytail. She has a small mole right underneath her left eye. Her red eyes give off a kind of glowing effect due to the contrast with her white hair. For typical clothing she typically wears tight black shorts with a bright white belt, a White tank top, with a red Saber tooth emblem in the bottom right corner, and a black hoodie with a tail so long it typically get mistaken for a cloak.
Extra: She has a burn scar on the left side of her lower back

III. PERSONALITY

Personality: distant is the best word to describe Rain. She isn't one for large groups of people, or even talking to people at all is a rare event for her, and when she doesn't talk she tends to be cold, and pushing people away from her rather than embracing the social interaction. However, this isn't to sya that she won't warm up to someone over time and become a little bit better about the way she treats you, it's just to say that that place isn't an easy one to get too. She likes her space, and she quietness, and so she will do anything to keep those things in tact.

However her personality seems to differ a little bit when she enters into a combat scenario. she seems a bit more emotionally expressive than she was before hand, although she seems to only express a few emotions while in combat. happiness and malicious intent. This is because Fighting people is a fun sport for her to indulged in, and gives her a chance to rip someone to shreds.

The main reason that Rain is a reserved person is more subconscious than a conscious behavior seeing as how she doesn't remember anything from her past. She does this subconsciously to avoid the hurting of losing someone close to her again, and so she simply doesn't want to get close to any one for fear that she may lose them.

Likes:

  • The colors: White, red, and black
  • Combat
  • Cuddling
  • Darkness
  • Winning


Dislikes:

  • Losing
  • Boys that attempt to hit on her
  • Arrogance
  • Excessive Incompetence


Motivations:

  • Winning (When she is losing, she is motivated to win)
  • Proving a point
  • Personal Gains
  • Power


Fears:

  • Death of someone close
  • Necrophobia (Skeletons/Zombies/undead things)


Positive Traits:

  • Regeneration (+4): You heal very fast inside and outside of combat. Small cuts that go up to one inch deep are healed in the next post.
    Explanation: C Rank damage healed every post.
  • Acrobatic (+3): You have excellent body awareness and coordination.
    Explanation: Character can perform flashy moves such as back flips, cartwheels and various other moves when dodging an attack.
  • Agile (+3): You are particularly flexible and poised.
    Explanation: You can dodge an attack up to B Rank, so long as it is feasible for you do to so (AoE excluded). Usable once per thread.
  • Stealthy (+3): You are particularly good at avoiding notice. You could be sitting somewhere in a thread at a bar and people wouldn't even notice that you were there.
    Explanation: You are able to blend into a crowd, and those entering threads cannot initiate conversation with you until you speak or state your presence in an obvious matter by doing something that draws the attention of others.




Negative Traits:

  • Aloof (-1): Your manner is cold and unapproachable, distancing you from friends and strangers alike. Your preternatural intelligence lends itself to viewing others as slow-witted and a waste of your precious time. Your charisma is lowered.
    Explanation: You can't act nice to people and you can't make friends easily.

  • Amnesia (-1): You are unable to remember anything about your past, yourself, or your family. Your life is a blank slate. However, your past may someday come back to haunt you. The rest of the flaws you pick are unknown to your character; over the course of your progress, your character will slowly discover them.
    Explanation: You can't refer to anything about your past. The rest of your flaws or not nulled by this characteristic but rather unknown to your character.

  • Bad Reputation (-1): You have a reputation that angers or frightens people. Examples include being unlucky, petty, or cruel. The rep may or may not be accurate, but in either case, word travels faster than you do.
    Explanation: You can't communicate easily with non player characters. Somehow they've heard of you and the things they've heard weren't too good.

    The "White Demon" reputation follows Rain around everywhere, she is known as a cruel and wicked person who tortured, beat, and killed others for fun. However Rain due to her amnesia remembers none of these acts.

  • Bruise Easily (-2): Each time you take bludgeoning damage, including that from falls, you take more damage than any other person.
    Explanation: You will take extra damage from bludgeoning damage, whether it was done through a spell or not. The damage received from bludgeoning damage is increased by one class if it's a spell.

  • Compulsive Honesty (-2): You cannot tell a lie, nor can you behave in a deceitful fashion. You tend to be blunt rather than tactful, even if it means insulting someone who you and your companions are trying to impress.
    Explanation: You can't lie and you will tell the truth when someone asks you something instead of lying. So if your team is impressing an ogre and the ogre asks if you guys are truly from the guild you guys claimed you were and lied about it, you will screw it up and say the truth.

  • Curiosity (-1): You're a naturally curious person and you find mysteries of any sort irresistible. In most circumstances, alas, your curiosity overrides your common sense. This forces you to investigate something unusual, even if it looks like it might be dangerous.
    Explanation: You will walk deeper into the forest you have never been before. You won't turn around from the castle that you have never seen. This can result into getting you into very dangerous situations.

  • Fragility (-2): Due to a serious vitamin deficiency in your youth (or something similar), your bone structure is unnaturally weak, and you are overly thin.
    Explanation: You will your bones easily when confronted with bludgeoning damage that is B or higher.

  • Intolerance (-1): You have an irrational dislike of a certain thing. It may be an animal, a class of person, a situation, or just about anything at all. Note that some dislikes may be too trivial or ridiculous to count--a dislike of Bavarian-crème-filled donuts or mechanical pencils, for example, has no real dramatic value and will not be allowed.
    Explanation: You must act very disgusted and displeased when your dislike comes into play.  

    Intolerance of Arrogance when it has no grounds.

  • Judgmental (-1): You form opinions quickly and change them very slowly. You also have a tendency to judge people on their appearance. A man dressed as a pirate, no matter how gentlemanly, is a scoundrel and a dog as far as you is concerned. A man covered in mud is a peasant, and a woman wearing revealing clothing is a prostitute.
    Explanation: You must act very disgusted and displeased when your dislike comes into play.

    Rain's Dislike when concerning this trait is her dislike for Arrogance, and once it is set in her mind that you are Arrogant, it is very hard to overcome

  • Overconfident (-1): Nothing is beyond your capabilities. If you wanted, you could defeat the best swordsman in the world; you just haven't had any reason to do so yet. And surely that chasm isn't too wide for you to leap across.
    Explanation: You are easily goaded, and anyone attempting to taunt you will succeed.




IV. MAGIC

Magic: Darkness Magic
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Darkness Magic is a type of Magic which allows users to manipulate and control destructive Dark Magic. This Magic has a physical form used for destroying objects, blocking enemies' attacks and picking up objects.[9] The color of the Magic varies depending on the caster (black for Rain). Users typically shape their attacks into the form of ghostly apparitions, which they can use in various ways.
Strengths: Darkness magic is pretty versatile in it's abilities, from it's connection to evil, and it also being an Energy the user can do a lot of different things with Darkness magic. Being as Shadow's spawn from darkness, Darkness magic is by it's nature, stronger than Shadow magic.
Weaknesses: Light and holy Magic Is darkness magic's main weaknesses, these magics will over power Darkness magic of equal rank every time without fail, thus requiring a 1 rank higher darkness spell to even match  a light or holy spell. Due to it being intermingled with Light magic, Demon slayers spells of any element receive a slight advantage over Darkness spells, When spells of equal rank clash the Demon slayer's spell will win but be severely lessened. However Demon slayer's spells will still be overcome by a spell of one rank higher.

Darkness God, Dragon, and Demon can all consume this magic's spells.

V. HISTORY

History:

it was a sunny and bright day. Kana and Nahe were excepting their first born child at any moment. Kana was in labor and pushing with all her might, and she had been in labor for the past 15 hours. An entire night had gone through while they awaited the child, and it finally looked like the long wait was about to come to an end, and they would see their child. Suddenly the sky grew dark and rain began to pour down from the sky. That is when the child was born. The medical staff as well as the parents were amazed at how quickly the weather had turned, and it seemed to be for the birth of their child. Storm wasn't a fitting name for the Black haired, and blue eyed child so she named her name, as the color of her eyes matched that of rain drops, and it had also just started to rain when the child was born.

5 years later...

Rain had grown up fairly normal, with magic all around her she was curious about it and intrigued. She played on joining the lesser known guild that was in her small town, even though neither of her parents were wizards. However nothing went as planned. On her fifth birthday the sky turned dark once again and Rain fell from the sky in the middle of August, which rarely happened. There outdoor partly quickly rushed inside, or at least attempted too. four wizards surrounded the group, each wearing dark clothing and with the cover of the heavy rain it made them hard to make out. Then just as quickly as they came, they were gone. Only someone else was missing from the group. The young girl whose birthday was being celebrated that day, had vanished just as the rain had stopped.

11 years later...

The 4 guild members had taken rain into their guild, and raised her there, teaching her darkness magic, and giving her her own tattoo. over time she began to develop and cold dark and secluded attitude, as the dark guild forced the girl to go on missions slaughtering the innocent and terrorizing the very town she was born in. Over time as her magical prowess in darkness magic developed, her hair turned white and her eyes began to glow red. On her sixteenth birthday she had grown powerful, powerful enough she felt she could control this group of thieves and murderers. So she challenged the Guild master for their spot, with the rules being go til death. The fight dragged on for two days, almost completely annihilating the forest in which the small dark guild hid. However, one was inching closer to victory, and it was in the palm of the Guild master's hand's as they knocked rain unconscious with a heavy blow to the head, and was about to deal the finishing blow until one of the four men that had raised her sacrificed himself for her. the three remaining demanded that she be kept alive. The guild master satisfied with at least someone dying agreed, but under the circumstances she be stripped of a majority of her power, and so dark magic was cast on her as she lay unconscious on the ground. She was stripped of her memory, and they reduced her prowess back to when she was a mere child. Then the three men carried her into a town far from which she would be known, and left her in an alley way.

She woke up the next day dazed and confused. She wandered around the town trying to regain memory of what had happened, but nothing was coming to her. Although some people gave her dirty looks, and some even whispered while looking at her, she once heard what they said about her. They called her the white demon. A sorceress whom had terrorized a nearby town for years, but she could recall no such thing, but she couldn't handle the stares and looks from people she got for long, and left that town within the next few days. She wandered around for the next year, rediscovering a few spells from her past that came as reflex too her, but it wasn't much, and it did help her reputation that seemed to follow her everywhere she went. It got to the point where she needed money and no one would even talk to her at the time because of it, so she decided that she needed to shake whatever reputation she had, and so she decided to join a guild.



Last edited by Rain Hikari on Wed Feb 11, 2015 11:19 am; edited 1 time in total

2Rain Hikari Empty Re: Rain Hikari Wed Feb 11, 2015 10:43 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Hello, Rain. I am Elizabeth, and I'll be Grading your app. In the list below, you can find all aspects that need to be corrected. Bump upon completion.

  • Please give a Birth Year for your character.
  • In your Negative Traits, state which is your character's Bad Reputation, just like you did in your Intolerance Trait.
  • Corrupting other spells can't be a thing, sorry. So please remove that from your strengths.
  • You'd be weak to Darkness God and Shadow Drago Slayers too, as they can consume your element and/or are resistant to it.

3Rain Hikari Empty Re: Rain Hikari Wed Feb 11, 2015 11:20 am

Rain Hikari

Rain Hikari
Bump for fixes~

Was also wondering if there was any other elements darkness might possibly be strong against?

4Rain Hikari Empty Re: Rain Hikari Wed Feb 11, 2015 11:35 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Welcome to Sabertooth!

@Rain Hikari has been Approved.

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