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1Inu Empty Inu Tue Jan 27, 2015 9:18 pm

Inu Mustang

Inu Mustang

   Inu 113Ulquiorra's_appearance
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   "Why can't I be free like a cloud? In this world of lies."
   

Name(s): Inu Mustang
Nickname(s): N/A
Age: 20
Sex: Male
Birthday: January 10 x762
Sexuality: Bisexual lends more towards females though
Class: Scavenger
Alignment: Chaotic neutral
Rank: D-class
Guild: Blue Pegasus
Guild Tattoo: left side of the neck
Face Claim: Ulquiorra Cifer (Bleach)

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 5' 6 1/2"
Weight: 121
Hair: Black
Eyes: Green
General Appearance: Inu has a small but muscular build to him. As he stands only 5' 6 1/2" and only wights 126 lbs. He has pale skin with two brands going down under his eyes he got as punishment for coving up his first brand. He has think black eyebrows. His fairly short and messy black hair. He wares a T-shirt that is normally white or black. Over his T-shirt he has a trench coat with white fur on the collar. His pants are a darker blue almost black color held up with a black belt. His face has a calm look to it most of the time rarely showing his emotions. His eyes are green with small slit looking pupils.
Extra: five piercings three on the top of his right ear and two on the bottom of his left ear.   Three brands one of a pentagram on his left hand thanks to a crime he was used as a scapegoat for. Two lines going down on his face for coving up his brand on his hand. Even though he didn't truly cover it up he just took up the habit of putting his left hand in his pocket.

III. PERSONALITY

Personality:
Cold Inu has at first a fairly cold personality. This is due to the fact of his shyness and his distrust of people thanks to is wrongful imprisonment.
warm After people get close to Inu he becomes warm and caring. Granted his outward appearance will stay the same as his normal cold look but his tone will become warmer towards people.
Honest Thanks to his belief that the world is filled with nothing but lies from people. Inu decided that he wouldn't be part of that and tell the truth as he see that he gains nothing from lies. Only a false sense of what it could have been. As a man who claims to be strong and is only weak gains nothing but a false sense of the strength that he so badly wants and is too weak to get it so he must lie.
Curious Has a curious nature about himself. Wanting to explore castles or dungeons more than anything. But maybe not as much as sleep or watch clouds float freely in the sky.
Shy Inu is shy as he isn't to well adapt in the art of conversation or approaching people. As he likes to have people start the conversation. Since its those types of people who are actually want to get to know him in his own eyes. Since they took the effort to speak first.
Daredevil Inu could be seen as a type of daredevil. Since those who aren't willing to push their limits will never grow. Sure Inu might take it to the extreme sometimes. But it is all in his mind for his own growth or maybe he has a death wish. Even Inu might not be truly sure about this himself.
Likes:
1.Quiet
2.Sleeping
3.Taking care of his guns
4. Watching clouds
5. Training with his guns
Dislikes:
1. loud and annoying noises
2. People who lie to him
3. having failed a request
4. having people being mean or rude to his friends
5.Being woke up from his sleep or naps
Motivations: The main thing that motivates Inu is the urge to hunt down the lightning mage that killed his father. Also Inu wants to protect nature and most of its animals. But he will not hesitate to kill one if it is needed. He is also willing to commit acts that some will consider evil or bad in order to protect what he deems worth protecting.
Fears:
1. Having those he cares about dying in front of his eyes and being helpless to do anything about it.
2. Rune knights thanks to his branding he now has a fear that could be considered a hatred. But he knows that thanks to his brand if they see it he will lose his freedom.
Positive Traits:
+13:
Negative Traits:
-13:

IV. MAGIC

Magic: green fire Gun Magic
Caster or Holder: holder-type
Description: The use of gun magic would require a hand gun to cast spell. The hand gun are the medium to cast spells so they are like wands or staffs to other mages. The Green flames are the ammunition for the guns. The use of magic will allow the user to restore there ammunition.  If the mage doesn't have a hand gun they can't cast their spells.
Strengths:
Strong agains wind magic
a great amount of offensive spells


Weaknesses:
Weak against water magic
heavy reliance on guns
almost no defensive or supplementary spells

V. HISTORY

History: Inu was born in a small and poor village here were a few neighboring villages fairly close. But he spent most of his childhood in his home village. Rarely leaving unless it was with his father who was a weapon smith and lost his wife during child birth. Specializing in guns more than anything which fascinated Inu. In Inu's free time when he wasn't in school he would help his father around his shop. Doing odd jobs like cleaning up or organizing around the shop. Even in some cases he would have Inu help clean some of his newer gun works. Those were the best times as Inu just loved his fathers guns he even wished to become a master gun maker like his father. Granted he might have been exaggerating when he called his father a master gun smith. As his father was rather humble about his works. But it seemed that a lot of people were really happy with his work and always praised his work. But Inu's father never let the compliments get to his head. Which made Inu love and respect his father more as his father never wanted the praise he just wanted the satisfaction of knowing people liked his work. But to bad there weren't to many gun mages around.

As time went on and Inu was now old enough so around the age of thirteen or fifteen. His father started to let him help out more around the shop. So now Inu was able to help his father make some of the weapons as well as clean them. The cleaning was the part that Inu liked the most. Sure the making of the weapon was fun but cleaning them it was relaxing to Inu. He felt like his problems would just float away and when he was done with cleaning he was at peace. Inu was happy with his life it was all he wanted. He just wanted to help his father run his shop and help him make his weapons. But that all changed on one summer night. Inu had to go to one of the towns to deliver a shipment or weapons his father made for a shop. But when he returned it was dark out. But the thing that sent Inu into a worry panic was that fact that the front door was open slightly and the lights were all off. But the workshop light was still on. It was past closing time so his father might have been working in the shop but why was the door open. When he entered to shop it looked like there was a struggle. As the room was a mess as there were burn marks on the walls along with bullet holes.

When Inu got in the back to the workshop what he saw caused him to freeze filled with bullet holes. There in front of him was the lifeless corps of his beloved father. In the corner came a mage who was wearing the largest grin Inu has ever seen. It seemed like the murderer took pleasure in killing his father. It sent Inu into a blood rage he quickly picked up two of his fathers newest hand guns and started to unload a few shots to the murderer. Only to have him run out through the back door and into the ally way. The murder ran on the roof tops so Inu opened fire on the man. This caused attraction to the two of them but before anyone could get to them. The man shot Inu with lightning magic which stunned him. When he came to he was in prison by the rune knights. It seemed that he got blame for the death of his father and was branded on his left hand. The brand was that of a pentagram in a circle. After a year has passed of Inu being in prison he got out early. Since he was well behaved while in prison during his time there. But when he got out he didn't like how people looked at his brand so he took up the habit of putting his hand in his pocket. But when the rune knights found out that he was coving up his brand the arrested him again. But this time they just branded his face with two lines under his eyes.

After he was released from prison the second time and with two new brands on his face. He decided it would now be a great time to join a guild in order to hone his skills with his gun magic. So he decided to join the guild Blue Pegasus.



Last edited by Inu on Tue Feb 03, 2015 6:09 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Inu Empty Re: Inu Sat Jan 31, 2015 5:41 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
So, there are very few small things needed to be looked into, which are somewhat common to be overlooked.

First, you need to provide an explanation to any traits that require it; branded and intolerance.

Secondaly, with your magic I need a little more to the description. More so about how the guns are incorporated to your magic, how the fire ties into the gun, and so on. It's area is to mainly describe how the magic works and I really do not see much of it.. no offense.

Please bump when edited. Thank you~

3Inu Empty Re: Inu Sat Jan 31, 2015 8:09 pm

Inu Mustang

Inu Mustang
bump for coke i mean fixes

4Inu Empty Re: Inu Sat Jan 31, 2015 9:58 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Ok, everything except the magic is in order. Now, when you speak about the type of guns you are using, it's more of a requip type. Holder weapons are a specific weapon or item that lets you use magic like a medium. So if you went with the basic holder, you need to stay with one gun. With requip, you'll need to edit your magic accordingly. Bump when edited~

5Inu Empty Re: Inu Sat Jan 31, 2015 10:25 pm

Inu Mustang

Inu Mustang
bump i hope that is better

6Inu Empty Re: Inu Sun Feb 01, 2015 5:23 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Now, the problem in which I do see with this magic is that it hasn't.. really changed. When you make a holder, it's supposed to be a singular item, be a weapon, a charm, or something else. Holder weapons are not something you can have an entire arsensal of weapons you can choose from, so I'll ask you to limit it to a single weapon of your choice to be able to use, and you can add to any weaknesses and strengths based upon it. Bump when edited~

7Inu Empty Re: Inu Mon Feb 02, 2015 8:32 am

Inu Mustang

Inu Mustang
alright i think i fixed it more than likly not but bump

8Inu Empty Re: Inu Mon Feb 02, 2015 11:54 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Alright, lastly, as I've just noticed, you need to have a last name for your character, as per the site rules. Please add one and bump, then all will be complete.

9Inu Empty Re: Inu Tue Feb 03, 2015 6:09 pm

Inu Mustang

Inu Mustang
fixed and bump

10Inu Empty Re: Inu Tue Feb 03, 2015 9:46 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Alright then, now I can officially approve this app.

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