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1Makoto Kaino Empty Makoto Kaino Sat Jan 10, 2015 7:36 am

Makoto K.

Makoto K.

    Makoto Kaino 373381563_402
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    ”Looked at my reflection from the broken mirror, and smiled. I am beautiful.”
    

Name(s): Makoto Kaino
Nickname(s): Mako
Age: 23
Sex: Male
Birthday: 1/7/X759
Sexuality: Straight
Class: Cleric
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Rank: D-class
Guild: Sabertooth
Guild Tattoo: Back of the neck - Gold
Face Claim: Saitou Hajime - Hakouki Shinsengumi

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 169cm
Weight: 79kg
Hair: Dark Purple
Eyes: Blue
General Appearance:
If anything people would say he’s a very pretty person since he has this androgynous look about him. He is a person of average height and is a pale and skinny person. He has long dark-purple/indigo hair that would go all the way to his back, and is always tied back into a ponytail with fringes that would go past his blue eyes. He is confident with himself, and so he walks with a great posture and makes sure that whenever he talks to someone he would make eye-contact that seems to pierce through their souls.

For his casual attire, he would wear a long, black, traditional kimono with a simple white stash and a long staff covering his neck. The traditional kimono. Normally, he would wear clothing that is considered to be more traditional and doesn’t like clothing that shows of his body even though he has a well-built one.
Extra: N/A

III. PERSONALITY

Personality:
Friendly, nice, generous are the words that most people (most as in nearly everyone who has met him) would say when it comes to describe him. In public he would make sure that he would give donations to charities for those that are in need of some funding and would make sure to talk to people who he hasn’t met him before. Some would say he’s a social butterfly due to the fact that he always talks to people however, in all honesty if he is left alone one-on-one with a person he can be extremely awkward especially when he has nothing to talk about. However, he tries his best for other people to like him and would even do great lengths to do this for example helping them with missions or whatever however, he does try to stay out of trouble as much as possible. He is also quite a serious person, and rarely jokes around.

He also takes things very calmly and seriously. He doesn’t really joke around unless it’s a situation where it’s light-hearted like social events. Thus this would make him a good leader as not only is he a charismatic person, but other people can trust him easily, and is that type of person who knows what he’s doing. He also likes it when he takes control over a group rather than let other people take control because he feels like no-one does a better job that him.

However this is only a facade as for those who truly knows him (which barely is anyone) knows that he has one of the most truly darkest personalities, though he does a really good job hiding it. He is an extremely narcisstic person, to the point where he could even be described as having a god-complex since he likes himself so much. If he could pick a life over his friends or him, he would pick him as he thinks the world deserved him more than the rest of the person.

If opportunity arrises, he can be also be an extremely manipulative person. He manipulates people to achieve his own goals and aims and aims and because of this, he doesn’t really care about other people’s feelings even if it’s his most closest friend. He also would not mind betraying his friends if there’s a good enough excuse, and even to that point where he wouldn’t mind killing them. Having said that, he hates unnecessary violence and finds it disgusting.

Likes:
- Good food
- Quiet places
- Alcohol
- Music

Dislikes:
- Loud people
- Smelly places
- Unnecessary violence
- Candies that stick

Motivations:
Makoto's main motivation is to go on a spiritual journey and find what his purpose of life is. He is willing to do anything that would make him happy and essentially find his passion.


Fears:
- Supernatural stories
- Insects

Positive Traits: (+16)
Spoiler:

Negative Traits:  (-16)
Spoiler:




IV. MAGIC

Magic: Earth Sculptor Magic
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Earth magic is a type of magic that uses one of the natural elements of earth: Earth. The user is able to manipulate earth using magic and use it for mainly combat purposes. It is versatile in the sense that the user could use it for offensive, defensive and even supportive purposes. Those who are skilled are able to bend it, and can change the density of earth

Strengths:
His magic has defensive, offensive and supportive elements which makes it very useful combat-wise. One element that is weak against earth is lightning as earth doesn't have any electrical charge so defensive spells are more effective against electrical spells.

Weaknesses:
The element that the magic is the weakest against is water as water has the ability to weaken earth and thus earth would eventually turn into soil. Also, if there’s no earth on the ground, the user can’t use the magic.

V. HISTORY

History:
Spoiler:



Last edited by Makoto K. on Sat Jan 10, 2015 9:28 am; edited 2 times in total

2Makoto Kaino Empty Re: Makoto Kaino Sat Jan 10, 2015 8:23 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Hello, Makoto. I am Elizabeth, and I will be grading

  • Your birth year is incorrect. If you want to be 23, then you should have been born X759.
  • There is no such alignment as Neutral Evil. You can be either Chaotic Neutral or True Neutral, if you want to be in the Neutral Alignment.
  • You cannot be guildless currently. Chose a guild.
  • State your full surname.
  • State the color of your guild tattoo.
  • Write another motivation please.
  • State what your character is intolerant towards, in your Negative Traits.
  • You wouldn't be able to turn to Earth. You'd be able to encage yourself in your element, but not turn into it.
  • Earth would be strong against Lightning as the soil has no electrical charge, and thus, your defensive and even offensive spells could have more resistance against lightning spells.
  • Earth would be weak against water, as water can turn earth to mud.



Bump upon completion.

3Makoto Kaino Empty Re: Makoto Kaino Sat Jan 10, 2015 9:16 am

Makoto K.

Makoto K.
Bump~ Hope it's ok now :3

4Makoto Kaino Empty Re: Makoto Kaino Sat Jan 10, 2015 10:32 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Welcome to Sabertooth.

@Makoto K. has been approved.

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