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1Astrid's Starter Ice God Slayer magic Empty Astrid's Starter Ice God Slayer magic Mon Oct 20, 2014 11:07 am

Astrid Hallman

Astrid Hallman
====Ice God Slayer Magic====

Name: Hyōjinmon (氷神門 - Gate of the Ice God)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Ice God Slayer
Class: Defensive
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 2
Duration: 2 turns
Effect: Creates a small barrier of thick black Ice (2x3 meters maximum), shaped like a glacier, that can be used to block spells, as well as allow Astrid to shield allies. It can endure up to one C-rank spell before being destroyed.


Name: Hyōjin no Haretsu (氷神の破裂 - Ice god's burst)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Ice God Slayer
Class: Offensive
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Instant
Effect: Causes an eruption of about 5, 1 meter long, clustered Icicles in a roughly circular area of two meters width. The spikes will aim towards the enemy inside the area (or enemies, towards the closest one). Getting caught inside the eruption deals minor cuts and bruises as the spikes impact and then shatter apart. She can target an area up to 5m away, and the spikes erupt at 5m/s.


Name: Hyōjin no Yoroi (氷神の鎧 - Ice god's armor)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Ice God Slayer
Class: Defensive
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 3 turns
Effect: Coats Astrid in an armor of black Ice plates that can block spells and endure up to C-rank damage before shattering into pieces. It will slowly melt as she moves around and fights in it, and after 3 turns won't be able to block anything.


Name: Hyōjin no Yari (氷神の槍 - Ice god's spear)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Ice God Slayer
Class: Offensive
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Instant
Effect: Astrid quickly forms a makeshift 2 meter long spear make of black ice (2 cm thickness) in one hand as she performs a throwing motion, and hurls it towards the opponent at 4m/s. The spear travels up to 5m away, shattering upon hitting max range, and will deal piercing D-rank damage to the first enemy struck by it.


Name: Hyōjin no Shiken (氷神の四剣 - Four swords of the Ice God)
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 (10 to sustain)
Requirements: Ice God Slayer
Class: Offensive
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Creates four set of talons (one in each hand and each limb) that can be used to slice the opponent, dealing cutting damage. Each melee attack with them deals D-rank damage. These talons are light enough to move around freely, but aren't particularly sharp or durable, and so can be shattered by an enemy spell of C-rank or greater. All sets of talons are 30cm long.


Name: Ice Consumption
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 0
Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer
Class: Supplementary
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 5
Duration: Instant
Effect: The caster is able to begin consuming their element when it comes within 5 meters of them.



Last edited by Astrid Hallman on Wed Oct 22, 2014 2:37 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Astrid's Starter Ice God Slayer magic Empty Re: Astrid's Starter Ice God Slayer magic Mon Oct 20, 2014 12:24 pm

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Hyōjinmon (氷神門 - Gate of the Ice God)

- Give it a maximum duration, please.

- Increase the cooldown a bit, please.

Hyōjin no Haretsu (氷神の破裂 - Ice god's burst)

- How fast is the eruption? Like, do the spikes erupt at 10m/s or 5m/s or what....

- How many spikes can erupt from the ground?

- Can the spikes attack more than one enemy, or can they only attack one enemy?

- Increase the cooldown a bit, please.

Hyōjin no Shiken (氷神の四剣 - Four swords of the Ice God)

- Do the 4 swords deal D Ranked damage together? If that's the case, state that into your description and please state that, each deals very little damage (In your case each would deal 1/4 of D Ranked damage or something like that).

 - Increase the cooldown a bit, please.

Hyōjin no Yoroi (氷神の鎧 - Ice god's armor)

- Give it a maximum duration.

- Have in mind that Fire-based spells would destroy not only this, but all spells quite easily.

- Increase the cooldown a bit, please.

Hyōjin no Dogō (氷神の怒号 - Ice god's bellow)

- State the speed at which this spell travels towards the enemy.

- Increase the Cooldown to 3, please.

Bump when completed.

Astrid Hallman

Astrid Hallman
everything fixed now xD

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Hyōjinmon (氷神門 - Gate of the Ice God)

- Approved.

Hyōjin no Haretsu (氷神の破裂 - Ice god's burst)

- Please state and have in mind that the icicles would deal D Ranked damage to an enemy only if all of them hit at the same time.

- Please decrease the number of icicles to 5.

Hyōjin no Yoroi (氷神の鎧 - Ice god's armor)

- Approved.

Hyōjin no Yari (氷神の槍 - Ice god's spear)

- Approved.

Hyōjin no Shiken (氷神の四剣 - Four swords of the Ice God)



- Please decrease the damage dealt by the swords Reason; If you keep it at C and deal 4 Hits to an enemy this will happen; C+C+C+C = B+B = A. So you'll basically deal A Ranked damage, and that is a bit OP. So please decrease the damage to D Rank, or decrease the duration to Instant.

Bump when done.

Astrid Hallman

Astrid Hallman
In that case, changed the burst spell so the icicles now actually aim towards the enemies on top of them xD fixed the claws

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Approved for Starter Spells.

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