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1Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells  Empty Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells Wed Jul 30, 2014 7:10 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Sky Dragon Slayer

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Name: Sky Dragon's Healing: Toujours Pur
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer magic
Class: Healing/Supportive
Element: Sky/Wind
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user manipulates clean air into a wide dome, surrounding a single target. This spell heals the target as long as the dome is up. While under the dome, the allis that is there will get their minor D Ranked hits and wounds healed.

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Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells  Vernier

Name: Vernier
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer
Class: Buff
Element: Wind/Sky
Cooldown: 2
Duration: 2
Effect:

O swift wind that dashes through the heavens!....
VERNIER!


A supportive spell that, by chanting out an incantation, allows the user to temporarily enhance the targets' movement speed by surrounding them with Magical Auras. When cast, the target, and/or user, is able to hover around at their own discretion within said Magical Aura. It can be employed upon multiple allies, and also on the caster themselves. This spell increases the speed of the user to 10 meters per second. Vernier can be casted only on 2 people at the same time.

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Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells  Arms-X-Vernier

Name: Arms x Vernier
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer magic
Class: Buff
Element: Wind/Sky
Cooldown: 2
Duration: 2
Effect: Like the name itself suggests, Arms X Vernier is a combination of Arms and Vernier, and allows the user to affect the target with both spells at once, increasing their offensive capabilities and speed. The speed increases to 10 meters per second and the user deals D Ranked damage. Arms x Vernier can be casted only on 2 people at the same time.

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Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells  Arms

Name: Arms
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer Magic
Class:  Buff
Element: Wind/Sky
Cooldown: 2
Duration: 2
Effect:

O strengthen of arm to cleave the heavens!
ARMS!

After reciting an enchantment and generating a flat, elongated oval mass of Magic before their hands, the user surrounds the target in a quavering Magical aura, enhancing their offensive power for a certain period of time. It can be used on multiple allies at once, and at the user as well. It allows the user/allies to deal D Ranked damage. Arms can be casted at only 2 people at the same time.

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Name: Sky Dragon's Whispering
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer
Class:  Offensive
Element: Sky/Wing
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Effect:


I, princess of the Skies, Summon Thy, Grandeeney, queen of the Heavens, Grant me your Power!
SKY DRAGON'S WHISPERING!

Upon reciting this incantation, the user's body gets covered in wind, and the user dashes towards his enemies, furious winds raging around his body, and releases a powerful technique that resembles a roar, although it is much weaker than a roar. The user unleashes this roar-similar technique as a tornadoe, a small, yet destructive tornadoe that deals D Ranked damage.

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Name: Wind Consumption
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 0
Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer
Class: Supplementary
Element: Wind
Cooldown: 5
Duration: Instant
Effect: The caster is able to begin consuming their element when it comes within 5 meters of them.



Last edited by Elizabeth Silvershield on Mon Aug 04, 2014 6:26 am; edited 3 times in total

2Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells  Empty Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells Mon Aug 04, 2014 4:51 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
And this is ready for revision folks!

3Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells  Empty Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells Mon Aug 04, 2014 5:46 am

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Hi! I'll be reviewing your spells!

Please note that, as starter spells, one of these spells can be C Rank.

Sky Dragon's Healing: Toujours Pur - Sustained healing isn't allowed, as that is regeneration. Please change this spell to be an instant cast healing spell. Healing spells can target multiple people, but only do a rank below in healing. Since this spell is already the lowest rank, please change this. You may lower the Cooldown to 1 post.

Vernier - 'Sustained spells' on NDRP do not exist, in the sense that they are sustainable indef. Every 'sustainable' spell must have a duration of posts, based on rank. You can find them within the magic rules under buffing magic. I think it's 2 posts for D Rank. You may lower the CD to 1 post--obviously the CD starts after the buff fades.

Arms x Vernier - Same as stated above for sustain. Remove the part about extra D Rank damage, as damage stacking isn't allowed. I.E. They do C Rank damage passively, and can do D Rank damage on top of that. This buff, at rank, would simply allow them to deal D Rank damage. If you would like more guidance, please check the buffing magics in the magic rules.

Arms - Same as stated above.

Sky Dragon's Whispering - Same as stated above in reference to the sustain. The winds cannot defend then attack, as that would be dual function. Please take that out.

Bumped when edited!

4Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells  Empty Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells Mon Aug 04, 2014 6:13 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Aaand I think I got everything right now! :3

Bump.

5Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells  Empty Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells Mon Aug 04, 2014 6:17 am

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Alright. One last thing, please state that all buffs can only be on two people at once. This is to prevent any confusion, and we've only seen Wendy do it to two people max. Please bump when edited!

6Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells  Empty Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Starter Spells Mon Aug 04, 2014 6:27 am

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
These spells are approved for Starters!

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