Name: Proxy of the Gods
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Earth God Slayer Magic
Class: Defensive
Element: Earth
Cooldown: 2 Post
Duration: 1 Post
Effect: Eric, while touching some form of earth, is able to slip out of his body leaving a clay replica behind. He can travel in the ground at a speed of 5 meters a second up to a total distance of 14 meters away before he has to remerge. The spell can be used when the damage of an attack is or less than a C rank of damage. If the damage is greater than a C rank then the clay statue will not have time to form completely and Eric cannot slip into the ground, instead he will be dealt the damage of the incoming attack.. The replica being a statue will remain stationary and can only have the facial expression that Eric had when he was attacked. He cannot tell exactly where he is when reforming due to not being able to see while in the earth making it extremely hard to pin point enemies or allies so attacking while resurface or under will be extremely difficult if not impossible to do. Magic that is strong to earth magic will need only half the damage to break it while magic weak to earth needs double.

Name: Cavern of Remorse
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 (5)
Requirements: Earth God Slayer Magic
Class: Defensive
Element: Earth
Cooldown: 3 Post
Duration: 2 Post
Effect: Eric holds out his hand and then causes the ground under a person to jet up causing them to be trapped. It will take a C rank of damage to break the dome over the person. The dome will be able to reach a max size of 3longx3widex3high m2. The dome will make things pitch black due to the EGS magic running through the area. This dome can form up to 5 meters away. Magic that is strong to earth magic will need only half the damage to break it while magic weak to earth needs double.

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Name: Servant's Sacrifice
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 (10)
Requirements: Earth God Slayer Magic
Class: Defensive
Element: Earth
Cooldown: 3 Post
Duration: 3 Post
Effect: Eric summons a massive golem like creation that will appear anywhere within 10 meters of him instantly. The golem will be the size of 3 meters tall, 2 meters wide. It will remain stationary and be able to withstand the damage that is up to a B rank of damage before shattering. Magic that is strong to earth magic will need only half the damage to break it while magic weak to earth needs double.

Name: Tears of a Fallen Angel
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Earth God Slayer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Earth
Cooldown: 2 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: ric summons black tiny specs of rocks that are each the size of a grain of sand. These minerals can form anywhere within 10 meters of himself. These minerals will appear 3 meters in the air above the target and will fall at a speed of 10 meters a second covering an area that is 3x3 m2. The damage done will be enough to lodge these minerals in a person’s body as well as causing major bruising and scraps.

Name: Mausoleum of Fallen Heroes
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30 (15)
Requirements: Earth God Slayer Magic
Class: Defense
Element: Earth
Cooldown: 4 Post
Duration: 3
Effect: Eric causes a home to appear made out of black marble. This home can have dimensions up to 5 meters long, 5 meters tall and 5 meters wide, these are its maxed sizes. The home can block attacks up to an A ranks worth before breaking. This mausoleum can be formed anywhere within 15 meters of Eric. Magic that is strong to earth magic will need only half the damage to break it while magic weak to earth needs double.

Name: God’s Appetite
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30 (15)
Requirements: Earth God Slayer Magic
Class: Defensive
Element: Earth
Cooldown: 5 Post
Duration: 4 Post
Effect: Eric is able to cause the ground within 15 meters of himself to become a soft liquid like substance similar to quicksand. The area that this spell can target has a max size of 5 meters x 5 meters. The ground will suck in objects and people in this area at a speed of 10 meters a second and will require damage of a A rank to blast ones way out of the spell. Those that are trapped will be pulled down to just their heads before the earth hardens to a concrete like state around their body. Magic that is strong to earth magic will need only half the damage to break it while magic weak to earth needs double.

Name: Stone Maiden
Rank: A
Magic Cost: 40
Requirements: Earth God Slayer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Earth
Cooldown: 3 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: If/ when an enemy(ies) are trapped, encased, surrounded by, or inside of an object/ area made of earth of created by Eric, he will be able to cause spikes to jet out into that area. Each spike will be the size of 2.5 meters long 1 meter wide and will cover every inch of the area that is being targeted and the encasement. The spikes will deal damage that is strong enough to rip through flesh, muscles, break bones, and even pierce organs.

Name: Stone Knight’s Armor
Rank: A
Magic Cost: 40 (20)
Requirements: Earth God Slayer Magic
Class: Defense
Element: Earth
Cooldown: 4 Post
Duration: 5 Post
Effect: Eric will cause a jagged rocks to cover his body instantly protecting him from damage up to an S ranks worth. The armor will not impede his movements, physical skills, or senses. Magic that is strong to earth magic will need only half the damage to break it while magic weak to earth needs double.

Okay made with the new rules so ready to be checked!

Proxy of the Gods
-Reword the spell a little bit. As it stands now, it could be considered teleporting. I know what you're trying to get at with it, just reword it a little better.

Punishment
-Change this to defense because of how the spell is set up.
-Change the cooldown to 2 posts and remove the part about passing out and dying after so many posts, since you are not able to sustain the spell for that long.

Golem Protection
-Change this to defense and make the cooldown 2 posts.

Tears of a Fallen Angel
-Approved.

Stone Maiden
-Provide the numbers in the AoE line above the description.

Partial Awakening
-Approved.

Lair of the Sleeping God
-Change the cooldown to 2 posts.

Price of Disobedience
-Change the cooldown to 3 posts.

alrighty everything edited

Leo wrote:The spell will be used when an attack is making contact with Eric’s body.

Remove this sentence from Proxy of the Gods.

Also, can you elaborate on the function of the clay replica? Can it move and act independently until destroyed? Or is it stationary?

Okay hope I edited it enough

Alright, everything seems well to me. Have fun training.

Moving for Revisions back to old system.

okay spells have been put to the system's standards

I'll be looking over your spells!

Proxy of the Gods - f the damage is greater than a C rank then the clay statue will not have time to form completely and Eric cannot slip into the ground, instead he will be dealt the damage of the incoming attack minus a C ranks worth. We will not allow this. If the damage is B Rank or greater, like every defensive spell, this simply cannot stop it.

State that you cannot attack on exit, as you have no way of detecting enemies.

Cavern of Remorse - Change the duration to two posts, max.

Add a sustain cost to this spell.

State how various elements both weak and strong affect this.

Servant's Sacrifice - Add a sustain cost to this spell.

State how various elements both weak and strong affect this.

Take out the part of how fast this erects. It is instant.

Tears of a Fallen Angel - These minerals will appear 3 meters in the air above the target and will fall at a speed of 13 meters a second covering an area that is 3x3 m2. The damage done will be enough to lodge these minerals in a person’s body as well as causing bleeding and major bruising. Lower this speed to 10 or under. C Rank damage cannot allow for impalement in any form. At most these rocks will cause scrapes.

Mausoleum of Fallen Heroes - Sustained spells must have a duration they can be sustained for. Please add this.

State the various effects that the opposing elements would have.

Because this spell stops attacks like a defensive spell, state it is such.

God’s Appetite - State that a B Rank spell or higher can destroy this spell. Make sure to include the various degree of opposing elements.

Add in a sustained duration and cost.

Stone Maiden - State that this can only be used on spells of your own design.

Stone Knight's Armor - State the various effects that opposing and weaker elements would have.

Add a sustained duration and cost.

Bump when edited!

okay all edits made

These spells are approved! Link back when done.

All Trained: http://www.natsudragneel.com/t2579-of-gods-and-dragons-eric-training

Approved and added