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1Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Empty Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Sun Jun 08, 2014 1:06 pm

Yitian Zuniga

Yitian Zuniga

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   "Sky above me, Earth below me, Fire within me."
   

Name(s): Yitian Zuniga
Nickname(s): Syrpen.
Age: 26
Sex: Male
Birthday: 11/June/X754
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Class: Mystic
Alignment: Lawful Good
Rank: S
Guild: Crime Sorcière
Guild Tattoo: It is red and on the left side of his neck.
Face Claim: Rayne from Neo Angelique Abyss.

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 5'11'' (180 cm)
Weight: 178 lbs
Hair: Red with silver lines running through it.
Eyes: Green eyes, which always seem to glow when light shines on them.
General Appearance: Yitian wears a green shirt which does not reach his waist covered by a Black jacket with Red designs outlined with white and a slanting chain. His pants are also Black with Red strips.
He also wears a collar with red designs and a silver necklace, while not being that tall in his opinion Yitian trains himself, arms and legs, anything he could think off, of course this makes him look muscular instead, sometimes he wears a red tank top, usually on warmer days or when he feels like wearing it.
Many also say he looks very young, though he gets annoyed when someone says so, he also has a spare set of clothes in a bag he wears on his back, a thin black shirt, which has multiple rips in it and some red jeans, which has two strips of black on it.

Yitian keeps himself and his clothing looking as good as possible, though he does this more to get attention from other people then for himself.

Extra: he has a scar running through his chest, from the top left of his shoulder all the way to the right of his abdomen, he also has a few smaller scars, though they are nearly invisible, if you would get close you would notice a small one in his neck and mutliple scratch like scars on his right arm.

III. PERSONALITY

Personality: Yitian believse that laws exist to further the public good, and that fairness and equality before the law are necessary for good to truly exist. Order is a vital part of good, not for its own end, but because when people act arbitrarily, they will often harm each other, intentionally or unintentionally. Justice is a very important concept to Yitian in every sense of the word - that people are treated justly, though when Yitian comes to the place where he has to choose between law and that which is good, Yitian has a hard time to choose, he has chosen to instead do the good thing before, though usually follow the path of the law

Yitian believes in the goodness inherent in all beings, in a code of conduct, be it a personal one or a set of laws, and that an ideal world comes from promoting this dualism of structure and benevolence that he believed in.

Yitian has faced some issues within himself, be it the time with his father which made him seem cold at times, to the part without him, Yitian has often refused to do what his father asked him, not even remembering why at the end, his mercy has lead to both good and bad things, for himself and for others, yet one thing is sure, Yitian will never kill anyone he deems to be good, while he would consider if a man would return to previous behavour when faced with a criminal.

There are other things Yitian always thinks off, be it his emotions or simple the death of a person he knew, Yitian has driven himself away and pulled himself closer to friends and family, as if he can never agree with himself on what to do, the only things he has is his honor, which he promised himself to keep up till death.

Yitian keeps friends close, he does his best to protect them, though he can sometimes go overboard with this, not allowing someone to do something out of care. When he believes someone is capable to do something he allows it, though this also has a limit, things are best done in groups, while this might not always be true, a group can help balance out both the good and the bad sides of a person.
Yitian also has dream to someday settle down, when peace has come and it is safe to start a family, if only he could find someone.

Likes:

  • The law, Yitian does his utter best to follow the law, his only weakness being his good side, his mercy, though everything has a limit.
  • Friends and Family, those close to him are those who matter most, he will do anything he can for them and will try until he drops to the ground.
  • Those who respect him, those who have not proven themselves to be worthy of repect should respect Yitian, at least, that is what he thinks, he thinks anyone weaker then him should at least show respect.
  • Those who can change after making a mistake, Yitian gives people a chance to redeem themselves, it is a part of him that has lead people to live the life they never could, where others would kill them, giving no second chance, Yitian believes that one mistake can teach you a lot, while two mistakes mean you will never learn.
  • Anyone who wins from him in a fair battle, People that can win from him in a fair battle should recieve respect, they are the ones that deserve it, though be it someone who disobeys the law, Yitian will show no respect what so ever,


Dislikes:

  • Unfair battles, Nothing makes him more angry then an unfair battle, cheating during a battle is like not having any honor at all, if he would get beaten in an unfair battle, Yitian would still not run away.
  • Criminals, Those who disobey the laws are those who deserve punishment, age, gender, nothing matters when you disobey the law.
  • Anyone who would harm a friend or family, honorless scum that would harm their own friends and family, those Yitian would show no mercy too, they make him go blind of rage, Yitian will be on his most serious when fighting anyone that does.
  • People who can't change after making mistakes, if you can't change it means you are too weak to do so, people should always try to better themselves, especially if given the chance.
  • Himself at the times he didn't do what his father told him to, Yitian should have listend more often, he got himself in trouble everytime he didn't listen and is sort of a hypocrite for when it comes to changing.


Motivations: Honor, Law, Justice, Yitian believes that is what the world needs and he feels like it is up to him to bring it or serve as an example for others, he wants to help people to change, while also helping himself to change, finding a way for him to finnaly agree with himself on everything he wants to do.

Yitian feels, that for him to do this he will need more power, he needs to bring justice, while keeping his honor.
Never harm an innocent or Yitian will be after you, he will go to the end of the world to find them, force them to their knees and give them one last chance to redeem themselves, make the same mistake again and you won't be as lucky.

Yitian will also do his best to become the strongest of all people, he will train himself as much as possible, yet considers things before doing them, if they are too difficult he will take longer to decide then with things he know he can do.

Fears:

  • Losing his honor: Nothing scares him more then the thought of losing his honor, he would feel useless if he did, like he can't do anything anymore, he would be at a total loss without it.
  • Not being able to help a person: The fear of being unable to help anyone, image a world in which no-one would need his help, that is what he fears, be it thanks to weakness or after the world is at peace, being useless is something he doesn't want to be.


Positive Traits:

  • Acrobatic (+3)
  • Agile (+3)
  • Athletic (+3)
  • Diehard (+2)
  • Enhanced Strength (+3)
  • Daunting Presence (+2)
  • Regeneration (+4)
    Total: 20


Negative Traits:

  • Aloof (-1)
  • Ambitious (-1)
  • Compulsive Honesty (-2)
  • Daredevil (-2)
  • Derangement/Insanity (-3) - Compulsions: He has to look good before going into battle with anyone.
  • Extravagant (-1)
  • Greedy (-1)
  • Intolerance (-1) - Those who hurt friends
  • Merciful (-1)
  • Overconfident (-1)
  • Proud (-1)
  • Trusting (-2)
  • Star-crossed (-1)
  • Lecherous (-1)
  • Judgmental (-1) - Anyone who can't change something about themselves is weak.
    Total: 20


IV. MAGIC

Magic: Crash Magic
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Crash is an extremely powerful Caster-Type Magic that smashes everything the user comes into contact with into pieces. It can even be used to both crack Magic into pieces, nullifying its effects, as well as to reduce the Magic's power and to deflect it. Even the most powerful spells are rendered useless when faced with this destructive and highly advanced Magic.

Yitian also showed signs of immense magic power, which he could release in a thick aura around him which could strike fear into people, some rocks would be send flying upwards by it, its force can be felt at great distances. (Anyone with more magic power can withstand it and those who don't fear it) When exerted, Yitian's Magic Power is white in color."

Strengths: As said before, Crash is an extremely powerful Caster-Type Magic used for smashing everything to pieces, it can crack magic and nullify its effects as well as to reduce the Magic's power and to deflect it.

Weaknesses: The magic, while strong, has no deffensive or supplementary spells, it is a purely offensive based magic.
It also requires focus for the attacks to be on full strenght.

V. HISTORY

History:
Yitian is the son of Rob Zunig, a wealthy weapon merchant, and Meera Zunig, a former Ice mage from Blue Pegasus. His mother died shortly after giving birth to Yitian, sending Rob, his father, into a deep depression, that would later turn to hatred as Yitian grew older. Early on in his life, Yitian did not interact much with his father, as Rob would often avoid eye contact with his son, blaming Yitian for the death of Meera. By the age of seven, Yitian had dug up an old photo album from the attic of his house, this way he learned that his mother had been an Ice mage, and decided to follow in her footsteps, to honor the mother he never met, and to become closer to the father that avoided him.

After two years of researching magic in secret, reading his mother's text books, practicing with kitchen ware and his own clothes, he finally understood magic. Excited, he told his father, believing that his father would be proud of him, and that they would become closer to one another. His father smiled at him, glad that he was doing what he felt was right, though he also seemed sad, as if he felt that he could loose Yitian.

His father didn't know what he could give his son, working harder to get just a little extra, to give his son even a little more.

Though one time something happened, Yitian didn't listen to his father, he even did the opposite at times, Rob didn't care much at first, though he quickly became annoyed with it, one time he broke and went too far. Rob hit Yitian, cutting him once across the chest with a sword that he had made himself. Then, late at night, he carried Yitian out, and threw him in a cockroach and spider infested dumpster.

Yitian was discovered by a strange mage after two days, who had fortunately been out late, and heard Yitians moans coming from the dumpster when she had started to take her trash out.

Hospitalized, and in critical condition, Yitian was on the verge of death, when his doctors brought in another local mage by the name of Yemi that offered to treat the boy's wounds, having been an expert in healing magic. The mage's efforts were successful, but because the wounds were so severe, Yitian would be left with many scars for the remainder of his life.

Yemi would check on Yitian every day, keeping the boy company, and to hopefully learn what had happened, since Yitian remained quiet. It would be three weeks later that Yitian would finally say something. He explained what had happened, from researching magic, to being hit and cut by his father. Much to Yitian's surprise, Yemi revealed that he had been friends with Meera for a long time, but had lost touch with her when she retired from the guild to start her life as a mother.

The mage told Yitian that if he was serious about following in his mother's footsteps, that all he would have to do is join a guild himself, once he was out of the hospital he again met the mage that found him, they had a chat about everything that happened and the mage told Yitian that not all people are like that, Yitian felt lost at first, not sure what to do, but the mage comforted him with what he said. Yitian had to do something, but what, he was only 10, that was right, it had been his birthday during the time in the dumpster, he didn't even celebrate it, not telling the mage either.

Yitian stayed in town until he was 14, using his time to help people around town and gather some things he would need for when he would start traveling, he also used his time to find a map which he could use, his time in the town seemed short, it was as if time went faster for him, so that he could reach his goal sooner.

Then it was time, he was 14 and had gathered all he needed, with his mother in his mind, Yitian started to travel, he had to stop many times, working small jobs to get some extra jewels, before he even knew it, nearly two years had passed, though he never gave up and kept on traveling, it was during his travel that he walked into someone, he recognised the person, it was the mage who found him when he was stuck inside the dumpster.

Yitian stood still, staring at the man, he approached him, not sure if the mage would have even remembered him after all that time.

"You.. I remember you." Yitian said to the mage, the mage stood still, staring at him, it seemed as if the mage was unsure at first, though then the man smiled. "The little boy." The man said, Yitian smiled back, the mage did remember him.

The man called himself Syrpen, he asked what Yitian wanted to do in the future, once he told the mage about joining a guild the man asked him why now and not before, once Yitian told him about all that happened to him in the time they didn't see eachother and all his research Syrpen asked Yitian if he could use any magic, but then Yitian remembered that he had only researched it, never used it. The man smiled, being interested in what he was capable of doing, so he thought about giving him a chance, an offer. "Well Yitian, if you want to join a guild, someone will have to teach you some magic." Yitian didn't understand what he meant at first, though the man spoke before he could ask anything. "I see no-one but me here, guess that means i'll have to teach you."
Yitian smiled, being happy that the man wanted to teach him.

Syrpen and Yitian trained, though Yitian forgot how long he had actually been with the man, it had been longer than 3 years, Yitian was 19 and he had finally learned enough from Syrpen, he thanked the mage promising him that he would become a great mage himself.

As it was so, Yitian went back on his travels, eventually joining the Crime Sorcière after walking into one of their members, they talked after Yitian had followed him for a bit, once he managed to get the man slip up some information on his guild, Yitian asked him if he could instead of join their guild, there he continued his training, going up in the ranks by hard work and the things he learned from Syrpen. Many were surprised by the magic he used, some were against it, others found it great when used for good, Yitian build up a sense of Justice.
Yitian contributed as much as he could to the guild.
During some of the missions he even came close to getting heavy injuries, though he recovered from most, leaving small scars.
There was a mission in which he nearly lost his hand to some monster, though after they took down the beast they managed to heal his hand just fine, leaving only a scar from the scratch that the beast delivered.

It was at the age of 20 that Yitian became an A-ranked mage, he was close to the guild master, even helping him out with some tasks that were not on the request board and things like scouting for Dark Guilds.

During one of the A-ranked missions Yitian found Syrpen, he was wounded, Yitian didn't ask him what happened, knowing that it might have been the work of a Dark Guild member, Syrpen told Yitian that there was nothing he could do for him, but do as he promised, to become a strong mage, one that could do what he could not.

Yitian kept on training, as he promised Syrpen, he wanted to become the strongest in his guild, hoping that he could one day help the guild, aid them in need and protect them from harm, he had dreams about becoming the next guild master of Crime Sorcière.

Yitian kept on helping the guild master, during one of the missions he even took down the leader of a Dark Guild, Yitian became well known inside the guild, some small stories made it into the world, though Yitian managed to keep himself well disguised among other people.

It was after a big guild tournament that Yitian went to the guild master, who told him that soon he would retire, after the next tournament, in one month, he would choose the next guild master.

Many trained for the tournament, week after week, Yitian was one of those people, he trained himself in a forrest, a place where he could train in silence, where he would not be disturbed.

As the tournament started many went down in the first round, Yitian nearly took a punch that would have knocked him out of the tournament aswell, though he managed to dodge it, taking down the other contestant with a punch, using crash magic to increase the blow.

In the last round there were two left, Yitian and a masked contestant, Yitian noticed he had never seen this person before, though he quickly got ready to fight him.
The battle lasted for a long time, the other contestant used lightning magic, it was hard for Yitian to get close enoug, taking some direct hits, after getting up from one of them he used him magic to force the ground down below the other contestant, he then used the confusion to get close enough to strike him with a powerful blast, sending him flying out of the field.

The guild master approached him after the last fight, he congratulated Yitian, then told him that he had something else to speak with him about. "Yitian, you know i will retire today, but i still have to announce whom the next guild master will be, i want you to announce it instead." He then handed Yitian a note, Yitian was not to look at it until he stood in the middle of the field, the guild master on his right, the guild members all around them.

"Today, a new guild master will be chosen, this person has proven himself over and over, and has shown to be willing to do everything to protect those close to him." The guild master said, he then looked at Yitian, nodding to him as a sign to read what was on the note.

"The next guild master will be.. Me." Yitian looked at the note again, unsure if it said his name, but it was there, Yitian's name stood on the note, he had been chosen.

Later that night there was a feast, the old guild master had a few more chats before disappearing, so far he has not been seen again.

Now Yitian plans to take the guild into a new era, one in which justice will prevail, one in which there will be peace like never before.
Yitian, user of Crash Magic, he gave himself the nickname Syrpen, after the mage who thought him most of the magic he knew, a sign of honor towards him.
Now that he thinks back of the times they trained, Yitian is glad, glad that he was able to do as he promised, now it was time for him to help the guild, leave the past behind.



Last edited by Yitian Zuniga on Tue Jun 10, 2014 7:10 am; edited 7 times in total

2Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Empty Re: Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Mon Jun 09, 2014 8:59 am

Naga


Hello, Yitian.

I know that you changed magic halfway to apply for the GM position but you can't have a dragon teaching you unless you apply for Dragon Slayer magic.

3Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Empty Re: Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Mon Jun 09, 2014 9:28 am

Yitian Zuniga

Yitian Zuniga
Bump

4Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Empty Re: Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Tue Jun 10, 2014 1:49 am

Yitian Zuniga

Yitian Zuniga
Bump.

5Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Empty Re: Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Tue Jun 10, 2014 6:02 am

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine

Let's get started, shall we?

Personality - You are 89 words short on personality as Guildmaster apps are required to have double the initial word count requirement.

Special Characteristics - You have 24 positive characteristics and 21 negative characteristics. Please make this equal.

Magic - There are no passives allowed with magic. So, you do not have to worry about destroying things without attempting to. Take out any mentions of this in the description and further elaborate on it. What you have from your strengths should probably be your description. Same thing as the description take out any instances of the whole destroying things  passively.  Then, elaborate on the weaknesses. Also, get rid of the part saying that, "the most powerful spells are rendered useless when faced with this destructive and highly advanced magic."

History -
"Yitian also showed signs of immense magic power, which he could release in a thick aura around him which could bring people in the immediate vicinity to their knees by its power, even potential S-Class Mages, and its force can be felt at great distances. (Some are able to withstand it.) When exerted, Yitian's Magic Power is white in color." Delete that. This is something that would go into your magic description. Take out the bringing people down within the immediate vicinity part out completely. As far as getting the guild goes it'd be wonderful if you elaborated more on it. You just made it seem like the guild was handed to you without any problem at all. It's very vague on the part where it should be elaborated most on. The same goes for you joining Crime Sorciere. Take out any mentions of dragons in your history also.

Bump when finished.

6Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Empty Re: Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Tue Jun 10, 2014 6:34 am

Yitian Zuniga

Yitian Zuniga
Bump.

7Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Empty Re: Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Tue Jun 10, 2014 7:07 am

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine

Magic -  For your weaknesses add in that you are only allowed to use offensive class spells. No Supplementary or Defensive spells will be allowed. All of your spells will do damage.  Offensive spells can be used to counter against other spells. The weakness you have is invalid due to you having complete and utter control over what it does and doesn't break.

Bump when edited.

8Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Empty Re: Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Tue Jun 10, 2014 7:14 am

Yitian Zuniga

Yitian Zuniga
Bump

9Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Empty Re: Yitian Zuniga (GM application) Tue Jun 10, 2014 7:14 am

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine
Approved.

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