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1Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Sun Apr 13, 2014 10:18 pm

Jin Takahashi

Jin Takahashi

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   "Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artists."
   

Name(s): Jin Seung Woo / Jin Takahashi
Nickname(s): Jin / Yuuki
Age: 19
Sex: Male
Birthday: 761
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Class: Cleric
Alignment: Neutral Good
Rank: D-Class
Guild: Sabertooth
Guild Tattoo: Upper Right on his back
Face Claim: I don't know who this guy is just saw him on google

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 5'6"
Weight: 58 kg
Hair: Short White Hair
Eyes: Bright Red
General Appearance: Yuuki has white short and semi spiky hair that is said matched well with his striking red eyes. He has a tall stature and a slim body built. Most of the time He is seen wearing a semi-formal suit, a blue jacket partnered with an open white polo with a loose tie . He always carry both of his sword on his both sides. He sometimes changed the blue jacket into a black coat if he feels like doing it.
Extra: None

III. PERSONALITY

Personality:Jin Takahashi is the kind of guy who is kind and friendly by nature meaning he was born that way and he would never change. Being kind doesn't apply to all people at all times, it only applies to those he trust and for those who are worthy of his kindness. He always prefer to be along with his guild mates and also plans to have his own team when doing missions.He is both quiet and talkative at the same time. If he feels like talking then he would talk to people like there's no tomorrow and if he know that there is no use in talking then he would rather stay shut. He is also flexible in some situations he knows where stand and he knows how to handle those kind of situations. Even though he really likes being in cold places doesn't mean he is cold by nature, In fact, from all those personalities mentioned above he is warm and easy to approach especially when someone gain his trust.

One of his dislike is dark guild. Because of this his personality changes a lot when facing a dark guild member. Instead of being warm on them he is more cold towards them giving them no mercy, especially in fights.

In a battle or a mission he is the kind of guy who prefers waiting and plotting all the moves they are gonna make. He always prefer to have plans rather than attacking head on, he believe doing it would just cause trouble and end up losing and he doesn't like the idea of someone dying because of his lack of plans.
Likes:

  • He likes the cold weather and cool places
  • He likes eating cold foods , ice cream to be specific
  • Staying at his guild is a good way for him to relax
  • He likes training and doing mission with his guildmates.
  • He enjoys fighting with a fighter who uses melee weapons

Dislikes:

  • He hates crabs and shrimps not just because he's allergic to it but he dislike the taste of it.
  • Dislike losing in battle
  • Dark Guilds
  • Of course dark mages and any mages who is working for dark guilds
  • He hates dark places because of his night blindness
  • Spiders

Motivations: Live his life to the fullest because of this motivation he always do everything with all his strength. Also one of his motivation is to become a well known wizard saint. This things motivate him to become stronger and every time of he thinks of his goal he works harder and his concentration is better than before.
Fears: Just like everyone else he fears death especially the death of people that is close to him. The other fear he has is the fear of spiders, he doesn't hate them but totally fears them to the point he can't try to fight against unusual size spiders, those that are larger than a normal spider.
Positive Traits:

  • [Dual Sword]Zealot (+4): This person has trained themselves to wield a specific type of weapon. This weapon can be mentioned behind the Zealot feat within brackets to claim it upon approval.
  • Enhanced Strength (+3): Your character is slightly stronger than other characters when it comes to physical strength.
    Explanation: You are capable of doing C Ranked damage with all melee attacks. This is not added to spells in any form.



Negative Traits:

  • Derangement/Insanity (-3) -- Phobia[Spiders]: A character afflicted by a phobia persistently fears a particular object or situation. She realizes that the fear is excessive and irrational, but the fear is disturbing enough that he avoids the stimulus.
  • Night Blindness (-2): Your night vision isn't worth squat, due to a physiological deficiency. This is due to a birth defect, and therefore cannot be healed by any means.
    Explanation: During night time in threads, or facing someone who uses Dark Magic, you have a hard time seeing more than 10 meters in front of you.
  • Trusting (-2): You don't like to believe that other people are capable of misleading and lying to you. After all, people are basically good, right?
    Explanation: If someone lies, you automatically believe it.


IV. MAGIC

Magic: God Magic
Caster or Holder: Caster Type
Description: God Magic is a caster type magic. The user upon casting a certain spell creates a magic circle with different colors, depending on stance, upon casting a spell. God Magic can be helpful in both offensive and defensive capabilities. The user possessing the magic can use different type of magic that has all neutral element. It has no elemental weakness and no elemental strength.

The magic lets the user use different stance. Ranging from different Gods he is able to use a certain God Spell depending on the stance.

NOTE: One Stance gets one spell slot. A spell under a stance can't have higher rank than the stance.

Strengths: The magic having different forms gives the user the ability to focus on either offensive or defensive. Another strength the magic has its great offensive capabilities having wide array of skill set to choose from making it again flexible in battle. The magic has both offensive and supportive ability depending on the current stance he has. At higher rank the magic spells are much more destructive and its supportive spells are more way useful, making this magic worthwhile to train.

Weaknesses: What makes his magic weak is the abilities capability to back fire on the user's ally. Most of the offensive ability of this magic is AoE that hits both enemies and ally. Having no element makes one of its weaknesses, it cannot do increase damage on a certain element. Most of its offensive spells has long cooldown.

V. HISTORY

History: Jin grew up in a family of non-magic users. His father was a well known swordsman in their village and his mother is a painter/sculptor. He grew up being interested in the art of swordsmanship and because of that his father who was very happy with Jin's decision taught him lots of things about swordsmanship. At the age of 10 Jin was forged his own sword not just one but two twin sword. Jin preferred to use dual swords rather than a single sword because he believed that using two swords looks cooler and better.While training he accidentally showed a bit of his magic to his mother who was watching him at that time, his mother was surprised to see that he inherit the magic capabilities of his grandfather who was the only one who can use his certain magic, God Magic. Because no one can teach him of his abilities his father took him to a journey to find someone who would be willing to become his master.

They look almost everywhere but found nothing. Then his father decided to go farther and go to where the guilds are located Jin's grandfather was once a member of a guild named sabertooth and because of that his father decided to look for someone there. After they reached the town where Sabertooth is located they finally found a trainer.

They found a trainer and it was a member of the Sabertooth guild. Jin was promised when he managed to use his magic correctly he would be able to join Sabertooth. Even though Jin wanted to join the guild he was still sad due to the fact that he have to leave his parents and live life on his own. His father told him that he must not worry them but instead do his best to make his father proud. From that day onwards Jin's non-stop training with his master starts. After several years he was allowed to join in the guild and become a full pledged mage. At first hed doesn't have any goal in his mind after becoming a mage but later when he found out about the wizard saints he decided that he would join them when he become strong and capable of being one. He promised to himself from that day that he would make his parents proud by becoming a wizard saint.



Last edited by Jin Takahashi on Sat Sep 13, 2014 5:53 pm; edited 21 times in total

2Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Tue Apr 15, 2014 1:48 pm

Jin Takahashi

Jin Takahashi
bump :)

3Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Fri Apr 18, 2014 8:12 am

Sayuri

Sayuri
Hello, Jin.

  • Your General Appearance should have at least 75 words, yours contains 61 words.
  • Motivations: Explain why these motivate your character.
  • Weaknesses: Add elemental weaknesses and range weaknesses, perhaps.

4Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Mon Apr 21, 2014 1:45 am

Jin Takahashi

Jin Takahashi
bump ready for recheck :D

5Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:29 am

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Long time no see Yuuki my boy! So, let's get to your regrading then!

So for your magic, I ask that you go more into detail about your description. It's too vague and there is t enough detail on the magic itself for me to allow you or anyone to have without knowing what it can do specifically. Otherwise you can walk around making summons, bombs, buildings out of ice (examples mind you) and call it legit.

Bump when edited~

6Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Mon Apr 21, 2014 11:03 am

Jin Takahashi

Jin Takahashi
Bump :D

7Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Mon Apr 21, 2014 2:48 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
For your magic, remove the part of changing the form of your holder weapon. That is making your holder weapon technically an indestructable requip-like weapon and does not actually apply to your actual magic. All in all you'e making an ice element requip, just not identifying it as requip, which is not allowed since the weapons you make cannot be destroyed. In essense, you will need to change out anything to do with it, or make this a caster ice make and make the weapons that way.

Bump when edited. Please and thank mew~ =3

Edit: This is going under review by Staff. Please be patiennt until the ruling is made. Thank you.

8Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Tue Apr 22, 2014 1:33 pm

Jin Takahashi

Jin Takahashi
I completely edited my magic :D and changed everything the description,strengths and weaknesses :D BUMP :D

9Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Thu Apr 24, 2014 3:42 pm

Jin Takahashi

Jin Takahashi
Let me bump this application and hope someones sees it *crosses finger

10Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Thu Apr 24, 2014 4:09 pm

Tali Zorah

Tali Zorah
You still have yet to increase your magic strengths and weaknesses to the 75 word requirement. You also need to change your Face Claim, as Jack Frost is taken by your other character, and yes that matters even if it is your character.

Also, remove applying for A rank in your app. You are required to start at D rank after staff collaboration.

11Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Thu Apr 24, 2014 5:13 pm

Jin Takahashi

Jin Takahashi
on the matter of the face claim , isn't the other character deleted because I was inactive? as for the strengths and weaknesses ill edit it later :D thanks

12Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Thu Apr 24, 2014 5:22 pm

Tali Zorah

Tali Zorah
No the other character still exists. We don't delete characters simply because they go inactive.

13Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Sat Sep 13, 2014 4:18 pm

Jin Takahashi

Jin Takahashi
Okay Here's the changes:
-Changed Magic:(Celestial Spirit Magic-former-)
     -> Removed that part on the personality
     -> Changed History, since my former history is about him being celestial Mage
     -> Changed some of likes and dislikes regarding on his celestial spirits
     -> Removed some part of personality regarding on his spirits, added a little bit to go with the word                count
-Changed the Face Claim(Jack Frost-former-) , cause you said it  :))
     ->Because of this edited some under appearance.
-Changed Guild because apparently Lamia Scale is Dead.
-Purchasing Characteristics Reset (500 Points)

14Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Empty Re: Jin(Yuuki) Takahashi [DONE] Sat Sep 13, 2014 6:07 pm

Tali Zorah

Tali Zorah
Alright, re-approved. Congrats.

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