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1Laylei Grimessence Empty Laylei Grimessence Thu Mar 20, 2014 12:56 pm

Laylei Grimessence

Laylei Grimessence

   Laylei Grimessence 20130710
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   "The Laws are meant to be followed and Rules are meant to be upheld those who break these rules will perish by my hand "
   

Name(s): Lyalei Grimessence
Nickname(s): The Scarlet Witch
Age: 18
Sex: Female
Birthday: March. 18 x761
Sexuality: Bi-Sexual
Class: Mystic
Alignment: Neutral
Rank: D
Guild: Blue Pegasus
Guild Tattoo: On the upper left part of her chest (Red in color)
Face Claim: Rias Gremorie - Highschool DXD

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 5ft 9inch
Weight: 150 lbs
Hair: long crimson red the reaches down to her lower back
Eyes: Blue-Green Eyes
General Appearance: Lyalei is a young woman who appears to be in her late teens with a buxom figure, a light skin tone, and blue-green eyes. Her most distinctive feature is her long, crimson red thigh-length hair, with a single hair strand. sticking out from the top. Her hair also has loose bangs covering her forehead and side bangs framing her face. Although Rias has worn various types of clothing throughout Her life, her most commonly worn outfit is a school uniform, which consists of a white long-sleeved, button-down shirt (short sleeves for spring/summer) with a black ribbon on her shirt collar worn under a black shoulder cape and a matching button-down corset, a magenta skirt with white accents, and brown dress shoes over white crew-length socks. Lyalei also tends to wear seductive lingerie and thongs, especially when she has a strong sexual Desire


Extra: On some rare occasions, Rias wears glasses when she's deep in thought, as she feels they make her mind work better despite having normal eyesight.

III. PERSONALITY

Personality:
Kind side: Lyalei is a kind woman by nature. She has always been caring and helpful to other people when they need help the most. Lyalei often travels to do more good deeds with her travel. She will often donate food to shelters or simply by food for someone that can't afford it. When in battle Lyalei is cool and collective in battle always thinking two steps head of a opponent combining Defensive and offensive skill to assure her victory. Lyalei was raised to be kind and respectful which makes her kind of passive towards fighting she will only fight when it's needed other then that the will try negotiating an opponent down if that is no longer a option she will fight
Angered side: Once angered Lyalei changes completely from a nice caring person into a hell-bent fighting machine taking out most of her anger that has been pent up onto the current target Also when she's angry she will often use her magic sloppily in a uncontrolled manner. But since she loses control of her Magic it may reach into civilian areas or may cause high amount of damage to the area around her and damage to herself. Once Lyalei has lost control it is hard for her to gain back the peace in her mind only by being sedated or beaten and contained will her rampage stop


    Likes:
  • - Peace- Lyalei enjoys peace and quiet whenever she can she finds the quietness soothing and makes it easier for her to think to herself
  • - Romantics- Lyalei considers romantics very attractive and loves when men or women try to be a romantic around her this is something she grew to love reading alot of poetry growing up
  • - Passion- Lyalei likes people who are passionate about what they do since she is very passionate about helping others she finds it amazing that other people can be just as passionate in what they do as she is with what she does
  • - Sex- Lyalei may not look like or act like it but she is a sexual deviant and will often go around and look for the pleasure she desires and will obtain it peacefully or by force



    Dislikes:
  • - Violence- Lyalei is against violence behavior unless it is self defense or was the only option out of a difficult situation
  • - Over confidence people- Lyalei thinks over confidence is the biggest flaw in any person it can cloud ones judgement and cause major altercations in battle
  • - Kidnappings- When Lyalei was a child she lost her younger sister from a kidnapping and it scared her for life just losing someone like that forever
  • - Spiders- Lyalei has a deadly fear of spiders and will do anything to escape a spider



    Motivations:
  • -Helping those who need it- Lillian's large motivation is helping those who can't help themselves
  • -Upholding rules- Laylei will uphold the rules and follow them to a "T"
  • -Desire to be a great wizard- Laylei desires to be a great wizard and obtain the power to help towns and cities



    Fears:
  • - Losing control of her emotions- Laylei keeps her emotions locked inside and refuses to share them with anyone this can sometimes make her very unstable and may lose control of her emotions and go on a rampage
  • - Death- Laylei Fears death due to not reaching her dreams and finding her lost sister
  • - Loss of loved ones- Dislikes this due to losing people precious to her



    Positive Traits:
  • - Appraise Magic Value (+4): Your ability to determine an item's worth and your knowledge of magic allow you to determine the exact properties of a magic item.
  • - Diligent (+2): Your meticulousness allows you to analyze minute details that others miss.
  • - High Society (+2): You know good manners and were trained to handle social interactions in noble circles. This is useful in requests involving members of the highest levels of society, such as monarchs, nobles, courtiers, lords and ladies, and high-ranking clerics.
  • - Persuasive (+2): You have a way with words and body language. Somehow you manage to persuade weaker minded people easily.



    Negative Traits:
  • - Compulsive Honesty (-2): You cannot tell a lie, nor can you behave in a deceitful fashion. You tend to be blunt rather than tactful, even if it means insulting someone who you and your companions are trying to impress.
  • - Derangement/Insanity (-3):Bipolar Mood Disorder:
  • - Merciful (-1): For a villain, you have a terrible weakness--you don't like to hurt people. Given the choice, you'd rather exile your deposed brother to another country than do him in. Whether this is because you want him to live knowing that you beat him, or whether you just have a small soft spot down in your heart somewhere, the result is the same: your enemies keep coming back again and again.
  • - Righteous (-1): The end justifies the means. You are willing to perform morally repugnant actions in order to achieve noble goals. Unfortunately, this can alienate those people who might support your cause if you didn't use such heavy-handed methods.
  • - Mute (-3): Your vocal apparatus does not function, and you cannot speak at all. You can communicate only through other means--typically writing or signing. This is due to a birth defect, and therefore cannot be healed by any means.

IV. MAGIC

Magic: Fiery Judgement Apocolypse
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Fiery judgement is a fire based magic and is heavily dependent on concentration and strategy. Fiery Judgement is a magic that utilizes in long range attacks and heavy burst. This also has a few limited close range attacks which aren't very affective. In Addition Fiery Judgement can also be used to stun and incapacitate enemies
Strengths: Fiery judgement is a very strong concentrated fire magic when used right can defeat even the strongest of foes. This is cc heavy magic and cast time magic. this magic is strong against plant, ice, wood based magics.
Weaknesses: Fiery judgement is a cast time magic which can be easily countered by agile wizards or very strong wind magic. it can also be countered by high speed magic and high speed combat magic. his magic is weaker to water and earth based magics as well.


V. HISTORY

History:
When Laylei was about 4 she discovered she had magic in her body and was a quick learner when she reached the age of 7 she had been miles ahead of any other magician she knew. Laylei also had a sister who was 4 years younger then her who was kidnapped one night Laylei tried to stop the abductors but didn't have enough power to stop the abductors and on that night she swore to get strong enough and travel the known and unknown world until she found her sister. Growing up she was born into a moderately wealthy family not super rich but in the borderlines between middle-class and rich so when she was little she attended some of the parties they would throw and she would often show off her magic abilities for the guest being the good girl she was but when she turned 16 she packed her stuff and started to travel the world looking for her Sister hoping somewhere she would be safe and sound. The first town she went to was Hargeon where she ran into a poor old man on a corner wearing rags she leaned down to the old man and began to scribble on a piece of paper that read "Do you need clothing or food?" The old man nodded and just like that she offered out her hand and took the old man to a clothing store and got him food for the night. After that she continued to help others while looking for her sister town to town. But one day something rare happened she was surrounded by a gang of thugs in a dark corner she kept scribbling words on paper trying to negotiate but they persisted. Laylei lost her temper never imagining people could be so ignorant and a fiery red aura surrounded her causing a minor explosion knocking the thugs back on the ground when she grabbed the leader of the thugs her grip was strong and her hand was burning with fire burning the thugs wrist and nearly breaking his wrist. She stopped and looked around at the damage she caused and ran off. She was forever burned with the Nickname The Scarlet Witch. 2 Years after that incident she kept traveling town to town and kept helping others when she eventually she returned to Hargeon the first town she went to hearing about a guild called Blue Pegasus. Laylei wanted to do more good around the world so she figured joining a guild would work better accepting request from people around the world. So she went to the guild hall and requested to be in the guild of course she had to write it out on a piece of paper.



Last edited by Laylei Grimessence on Sat Mar 22, 2014 8:44 pm; edited 5 times in total

2Laylei Grimessence Empty Re: Laylei Grimessence Sat Mar 22, 2014 12:17 am

Laylei Grimessence

Laylei Grimessence
*Bump*

3Laylei Grimessence Empty Re: Laylei Grimessence Sat Mar 22, 2014 12:26 am

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Hello~ I'll be grading your app.

First off, you need to add bbcode to all of the sections like in the application and code.

Secondly, your birthdate is wrong. You need to make the year 761 or change the age as August has not passed yet.

Next up, for your likes-traits, please add them into a list so they can be more organized.

Now for magic, you need to explain more detail into everything. Explain the functions and what the magic can do.

Bump when edited~

4Laylei Grimessence Empty Re: Laylei Grimessence Sat Mar 22, 2014 12:34 am

Laylei Grimessence

Laylei Grimessence
*Holds up a sign saying the post was bumped* :D

5Laylei Grimessence Empty Re: Laylei Grimessence Sat Mar 22, 2014 2:25 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Ok Wiley Coyote, last thing is just to expand on the weaknesses some more.

Also as a side note *Sticks tongue out* BEEP BEEP! *speeds away*

6Laylei Grimessence Empty Re: Laylei Grimessence Sat Mar 22, 2014 3:55 pm

Laylei Grimessence

Laylei Grimessence
*Holds up a sign saying bump*

7Laylei Grimessence Empty Re: Laylei Grimessence Sat Mar 22, 2014 8:21 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
*pokes* -Add to strengths this magic is strong against plant, ice, wood based magics.

-Add to weaknesses that this magic is weaker to water and earth based magics as well.

Bump when edited.

8Laylei Grimessence Empty Re: Laylei Grimessence Sat Mar 22, 2014 8:44 pm

Laylei Grimessence

Laylei Grimessence
*Holds the bump sign*

9Laylei Grimessence Empty Re: Laylei Grimessence Mon Mar 24, 2014 6:22 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
*hands Laylei an anvil that says approved and watching the cliff crack and break off and Laylei fall to the bottom of the ravine.* o.o

Approved~

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