Name:Emerald Empress Mode
   Rank: C
   Magic Cost:20 (-10 sustain cost)
   Requirements: Energy mapnipulation magic
   Class: Supplementary
   Element: Energy
   Cooldown:5 posts
   Duration: 4 posts or until called off
   Effect:  When electra uses this spell she changes into a emerald green female humanoid-shaped construct of pure, compressed energy. Her body is covered by a shell of green energy which appears as if she were a naked. Her hair is one tendral of green energy her eyes blazing green,This spell gives electra a 25% percent boost in speed.    


   Name: Emerald knight
   Rank: C
   Magic Cost: 20(-10 sustain cost)
   Requirements: Energy manipulation magic
   Class: Offensive
   Element: Energy
   Cooldown:5 posts (Starts when the knight is destroyed or dismissed.)
   Duration: 4 posts or until called off /broken
   Effect: When using this spell electra summons a green knight with sword and shield crafted from pure energy He wears light plate armor with chainmail underneath all emerald green. This knight is crafted by electras energy manipulation magic the knight fight as if he were a real person, it has a sword which is 2 meters long and 2 centimeters wide and his shield is 1 by 1 meter. The knight attacks with quick strikes and rams opponents with his shield. The knight attacks two times per post.The knight can be broken by 4-D ranks or 2-C ranks or 1-B rank or Higher spells.The knights can go no further than 10 meters and causes C-ranked damage.While this spell is active she can not use it again.

Name:Goblin Dust
Rank: C
Magic Cost:20
Requirements: Energy manipulation magic
Class:Offensive
Element: Energy
Cooldown:3
Duration: Instant
Effect: Electra creates a green dust with particles made of small condensed energy from her hands moving in a straight line towards opponent and surrounding them . She then envelopes her opponent in this dust, then the dust will then start to sparkle rapidly giving the for 2.5 seconds before they explode, causing C-ranked damage. This spell can be blocked by higher ranked spell. This spell can reach up to 10 meters and travel at 5 m/s and 10 seconds to reach opponent.

Hello Electra,

Emerald Empress:

-Her Emerald Empress form is not well known. Please elaborate upon what it looks like and its physical features in order to provide readers with a rough description of what the armour is like. At C-Rank, you may not buff yourself by 50%. The maximum amount allowed is 25%. Therefore please make the change. In addition, please check grammatical, capitalisation, and spelling errors in this spell. Also, take out the: "When electra gets serious" etc. because it is unprofessional and is a hinderance to the eye.

Emerald Knight:

-What type of armour does the Knight possess? What does he/she look like? (i.e. pure emerald construct)

-When you say that the knight has a range of 10 meters, do you mean that you may only summon him within 10 meters of you or can he not stray further than 10 meters away from you?

-Please state that whilst this spell is still active, you may not use it again.

-State in the cool-down that the timer starts when the knight is destroyed/dismissed.

-How does the knight attack?

-Check spelling, grammatical, and capitalisation errors.

Goblin Dust:

-How does Electra create this dust? Please explain the process of creation.

-Can this spell be blocked?

-Does it have weaknesses?


When you're done, please bump for a re-edit.

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Alright, I'll be taking over for final review!

Emerald Knight: Please state how many times this construct can attack per post.

Goblin Dust: Please state how the dust travels to the opponent (if generated from her hands), how fast, and how long it takes before detonation. Bump when edited.

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Goblin Dust: You still didn't state how long it takes to travel to them. Please add this.

Bump when edited!

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Jewels deducted...go train dem spellz!

Finished training

http://www.natsudragneel.com/t2126-rampaging-through-the-forest-trainingdone#12237

Bump for completion

Its legit, approved.