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Baron Corbin

Baron Corbin
Note: These are the basic 5 FREE spells - no cost / no training.

Name: Extender
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp (5mp)
Requirements: Sword: Field Scalpel
Class: Supplementary
Element: None
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect:  This spell entitles the mage to channel his magic through his weapon and alter the properties of the blades. Giving both blades, the scalpel & saw a two foot increase in side. This size does not change the durability

Name: Vibroblade
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp (5mp)
Requirements: Sword: Field Scalpel
Class: Supplementary
Element: None
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The ability within the blade itself becomes activated and surges through the user. This spell causes the power within the blade to buff the user making him more agile boosting his speed to D-class at 10m/s on top of normal speed. This does not enhance the damage or give a bonus to the blade itself. This spell lasts for 2 posts.

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Name: Injector: Zydrate Gun
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp
Requirements: Requip: The Dark Doctor
Class: Supplementary
Element: None
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Until Destroyed
Effect: Another specific tool in the medical field is the injector. This injector is modified for field and battle use. The Injector itself creates a a field in which it takes the magic from the user that he/she puts into it and can be then injected into the target at hand. Depending on the spell used, the result will vary. This tool is very delicate and can be easily destroyed, if targeted.

Sub-Spell
Name: Scanner
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp
Requirements: Armor: Laboratory Field Coat
Class: Supplementary
Element: None
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The mage casts the spell through the field suit in which the goggles of the headpiece light up activating. In order for this spell to take off, the mage must have on the headpiece of the armor. This will allow the mage to see clearly up to 50 meters so long as view is unobstructed.

Name: Oxygen Tent
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20mp
Requirements: Armor: Laboratory Field Coat
Class: Defensive
Element: Wind
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Until Destroyed
Effect: As long as the mage wears the medical field coat he has the ability to extend its magical use outward protecting the mage from harm. The suit itself releases oxygen from the pours and surrounds the mage in a dome-like state. The size of the dome surrounds the mage in a 15m radius. This dome can withstand up to 1 B-class damage before being destroyed.



Last edited by Baron Corbin on Wed Oct 29, 2014 12:02 pm; edited 5 times in total

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Baron Corbin

Baron Corbin
Bump Das Thread!

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Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Hi, I'll be reviewing your spells!

Extender: State an equal length for both, not varying. Add a sustain cost.

Vibroblade: Making your weapon impervious to destruction, while maintaining it does the same amount of damage is a no go. Change this.

Virus: State that the element doesn't add bonus damage, just gives it D Rank Shadow damage since this is a D Rank spell. Add a sustain cost.

Discharge: State that the element doesn't add bonus damage, just gives it D Rank electric damage, since this is a D Rank spell. Add a sustain cost.

Oxygen Tent: This is a defensive spell, change the type to that. State how big the dome is. State that is can withstand only 1 B Rank, 2 C Ranks, or 4 D Ranks before being destroyed (the dome).

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Baron Corbin

Baron Corbin
Exteder: Actually it can be varying as it is not extending both blades. The spell is for either side and since the blades themselves are not the same size it will vary. There is nothing in the rules that states this is a no go. Sustain cost, yes I will add such.

Vibroblade: Changed for elemental property

Virus: This spell is not considered an offensive spell and therefore does not need to state D-class damage. It is only changing the elemental property of the pole. - Sustain cost added.

Discharge: Same with this spell as well. - Sustain cost added.

Oxygen Tent: oops it was supposed to state 'defensive' ty - The damage is staded before being destroyed. You might have  overlooked it.

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Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Extender: The rules don't state that it can't have a varying length, but neither does it state it can. Change this, or change the spell.

Vibroblade, Virus, and Discharge: You seem to misinterpret. You are attempting to give your weapons elemental properties in a cheap way with a liberal form of ReQuip. ReQuip is used to equip various objects and of varying elemental properties and strengths--depending on the item. The way you are building your character is for a single set of items that you can cheaply change the elements to instead of having to swap items with set elements. I am willing to work with your vision for your ReQuip. Either you can change these spells to do as stated, or I they will be denied and you will have to make spells to equip items with set elemental attributes. Your choice.

Oxygen Tent: Approved.

Baron Corbin

Baron Corbin
Ok, got rid of the two D-class spells as they would be completely useless due to their rank. I wasn't trying to be cheap about anything nor was it intended to be so. So I took two of the D-class spells from the other page and put them here. I also changed the vibroblade and made it a buff.

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Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Injector: Zydrate Gun: Give this a sustain cost.

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Baron Corbin

Baron Corbin
Question: Do weapons and shields and such need a sustain cost? If not then why the Injector Gun?

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Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
No, I stand corrected. They do not. These starters are approved.

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