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1FRANATIC WOLFGANG Empty FRANATIC WOLFGANG Sun Apr 20, 2014 7:21 am

Franatic Wolfgang

Franatic Wolfgang

   FRANATIC WOLFGANG Jzv2KUQ
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   "Man always thinks about the past before he dies, as if he were frantically searching for proof that he truly lived."
   

Name(s):  Franatic Wolfgang
Nickname(s): Sabertooth's Light Punisher
Age: 21
Sex: Male
Birthday: 11/02/X759
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Class: Cleric
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Rank: A (Free Rank)
Guild: Sabertooth
Guild Tattoo: His right palm
Face Claim: Heine Rammsteiner - DOGS

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 5"10"
Weight: 180 lbs
Hair: White
Eyes: Red
General Appearance: Franatic is a tall man, with a muscular body. He is an albino, which in his case results in pale skin, white hair, and red eyes. His hair is short and his ears are pierced multiple times with four rings in his right ear and two rings and a stud in his left. He usually wears black coat draped over his shoulders like a cape, inside he wears a white T-Shirt. He wears black long jeans, and black shoes with his guild's name. He has a scar on his chest, he got it when he fell from a tree.
Extra:

III. PERSONALITY

Personality: Franatic is a man whose been instilled with values. He is someone who believes strongly in being able to forge his own path by his own two hands. He's not opposed to fighting to protect his beliefs. Even if he looses. He's never set in his ways though he is constantly adapting to the world around him letting the way of the world help shape, define and re-define him. But his core beliefs never change. Fight for what you believe in, think with your head not your heart, if it's something that burns strongly within follow it.

Franatic's reaction to people is initially friendly, however if they prove that they are against him or act to hurt someone without any provocation then he grows to dislike them. He's a charismatic person, he could persuade someone to do something for him. His ambitions lead him to a great path, the path shows the true side of him. He often respects his enemies in battle, humiliating them on the battle isn't his style.

He has two major quirks to his personality, one being that be believes that the strongest beliefs always win. Regardless of the medium through which they are conveyed be it words or fists. The second quirk is a simple one. Living for yourself is the same as living for nothing. Live for others, don't only focus on yourself.

Likes:

  • Meat
  • Beach
  • Festival
  • Sex
  • Woman
  • Chocolate
  • Sabertooth
  • Magic
  • Swords

Dislikes:

  1. Thieves
  2. Dark Guild
  3. Betrayal
  4. Poison
  5. Rainforest
  6. Assholes (person)

Motivations: He wanted to reach his highest power, where no one can challenge his authority. He won't allow anyone to tease his dignity, his friends, and his hard work. He wanted to craft peace with his own magics, and destroy all evil plans. His father's death carved a path in his heart, he now wanted to prove himself to the world, with such fame and power, he can craft peace easily.
Fears:

  • Losing his friends
  • His guild destroyed
  • Unable to reach his dream

Positive Traits:

  • Agile (+3): You are particularly flexible and poised.
  • Athletic (+3): You have a knack for athletic endeavors.
  • Persuasive (+2): You have a way with words and body language. Somehow you manage to persuade weaker minded people easily.
  • Regeneration (+4): You heal very fast inside and outside of combat. Small cuts that go up to one inch deep are healed in the next post.
  • Daunting Presence (+2): You are skilled at inducing fear in your opponents.
  • Diehard (+2): You can remain conscious after attacks that would fell others.


Total (P): 16

Negative Traits:

  • Ambitious (-1): You crave power. Money is nice, but being in charge of other people is your favorite thing. You are likely to be brought down by attempting a risky grab for power and failing. Even when deals are risky you will give in and agree most of times.
  • Bravado (-2): You are rash in combat, refusing to show weakness by falling back from your enemies' blows. You either face it and stop it, or get hit in the progress. In addition, you cannot fight defensively.
  • Indecisive (-1): You have been known to hesitate when faced with difficult choices or split-second decisions. If forced to choose between letting a villain escape and rescuing a loved one from being lowered into a snake pit, you're likely to agonize over the situation until something--perhaps a cry for help from your sweetheart--forces your hand.
  • Lecherous (-1): You have a lusty nature and a tendency to pursue the pleasures of the flesh. A woman or a man (however your tastes run) is an almost irresistible temptation to you. You give in to these temptations easily.
  • Trusting (-2): You don't like to believe that other people are capable of misleading and lying to you. After all, people are basically good, right?
  • Overconfident (-1): Nothing is beyond your capabilities. If you wanted, you could defeat the best swordsman in the world; you just haven't had any reason to do so yet. And surely that chasm isn't too wide for you to leap across.
  • Reckless (-1): You lack the emotion of fear. Unfortunately, it is often an important cue that keeps men from doing foolhardy things. Sure, you don't flinch at the sight of even the most hideous monster, but neither do you feel the need to run away when outclassed.
  • Daredevil (-2): You only really feel alive when you're staring death in the face. Your character is addicted to the thrill of death-defying stunts, pushing himsefl to the limit at every available opportunity.
  • Allergies [Fish] (-1): You are afflicted with allergies. These may be something as simple as hay fever, but the reactions to such will result in something like a huge bout of sneezing and gasping. You must mention this allergy in your character application.
  • Hedonistic (-1): You love a good time. You party too much, drink too much, and eat too much. You have trouble resisting an invitation to join someone in a drink and sometimes shirk your duty if offered a more enjoyable time elsewhere. Whenever a good time is presented you let your guard. You're also not capable to resist seduction of any sort. It's just not in your nature to resist such opportunities.
  • Dark Secret [He has killed a person](-1): You have some sort of secret that, if revealed, would make you an outcast amongst your society and companions. While this secret is on your mind at all times, it will come up in topics only once in a while, but when it does, watch out!
  • Compulsive Honesty (-2): You cannot tell a lie, nor can you behave in a deceitful fashion. You tend to be blunt rather than tactful, even if it means insulting someone who you and your companions are trying to impress.


Total(N): 16

IV. MAGIC

Magic: Light Magic
Caster or Holder: Caster-type
Description: It is a Magic in which the caster is able to manipulate and utilize light in various ways. Occasionally, a certain technique, usually involving the hands, is used to cast a Light spell. When used for offense, the Magic can take the form of a sphere-like object that can be ejected at the opponent or as a beam that can be blasted. Light can also be emitted from the caster's body;
Strengths: The Light could destroy things or obstacles, the explosion created by light could be a huge explosion. Depending on the brightness or heat that the light emits. It can be capable enough to blind an enemy, make them unable to see, and the user could attack the enemy easily. If the magic technique is higher, the user can release a continuous surge of destructive light, which destroys everything in its path.
Weaknesses: A certain technique, usually involving the hands, is used to cast a Light spell. If the hands couldn't move/hardly tied, it's really hard for the caster to cast a Light spell. The heat or brightness of the light depend on the user's power, if his power is low, the energy emitted by the light couldn't create a massive explosion or blind the enemy. If the light isn't concentrated, the light couldn't kill the enemy/explode, the light only able to disable the enemy's vision temporarily.
V. HISTORY

History:

Franatic was born in Magnolia. Heiden, his uncle, who saw a great potential in Franatic, and bravery that Franatic has, decided to take care of Franatic after his parents death. Heiden carried the baby Fran to his home. Franatic became his step son, and Heiden would give his power and knowledge to Fran, and hoping that these would aid him in the future to become a great magician. His uncle taught his son very much, how to talk, walk, and, teach him the magic of Light. Heiden would carry Fran to the darkest caves, and taught to find the true light in him. Heiden was really hard on him, he did this to develop Fran's skills, Heiden left Fran on the darkest cave during a severe thunderstorm. On that challenging and intense day, Fran never picked up by Heiden, he thought that Heiden left him until he died there. The severe thunderstorm lasted for a week, on the 4th day, Fran decided to leave cave by himself. He tried to walk on the darkness, but it's really hard for him to see. He couldn't find the appropriate path, and he always bumped into the cave's wall. With his will and hard work, he could control his Light Magic, he casted the Light Spell, and the Light Spell lit the entire cave. Soon, Fran found the way out from the cave. But, Fran found that Heiden disappeared, leaving a big burnt mark on his house's wall.

Fran punched the ground, his anger was really big at that time. Was he killed? or he left Fran? He touched the burnt mark for the last time, he took his belongings, the only thing Heiden left was their photo. Fran left the valley, and stepped into the outside land to find new life. With his basic magic skills, he couldn't survive in this harsh world. He wanted to master his magic, and surpassed Heiden's marvelous light techniques. He wanted to live a life where he could feel the true freedom, he also wanted to find Heiden, to find Heiden isn't easy, Fran must explore the entire planet. With the motivation to find Heiden and surpass him, he must be the most powerful magician, and change his weaknesses as his strengths. The only thing he needs to do is to find a great teacher, and a better place for him to train, and test his skills into the limit or maybe beyond the limit. He stared at his future, and said a word that become his motivation, I'm ready to surpass him! Wait for me, Heiden!. He will overcome every obstacle, and destroy everyone who step in his way!



Last edited by Franatic on Tue Apr 22, 2014 4:24 am; edited 5 times in total

2FRANATIC WOLFGANG Empty Re: FRANATIC WOLFGANG Mon Apr 21, 2014 4:50 am

Franatic Wolfgang

Franatic Wolfgang
Done!

3FRANATIC WOLFGANG Empty Re: FRANATIC WOLFGANG Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:11 am

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Hello Franatic! I'm Aoi and I'll be grading your app today-nya!~ =3

So let's begin, shall we?

As my first thing, you are a light mage, correct? Light mages do not use Merciful as you don't really have to kill people for fun of anything. I'm going to ask you to replace this please.

Next up is that I ask you add in with brackets ([]) or parenthesis what your dark secret is on that trait on the end or after the colon, either place is fine.

Now for your magic, you silly boy~, are not actually allowed to apply for a dragon slayer spot. There is a thread which explains us removing the rights to, and I simply ask you make a new magic please. This may also have you alter your history to match.

Please bump when edited and have a great day-nya!~ ^_^

4FRANATIC WOLFGANG Empty Re: FRANATIC WOLFGANG Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:53 am

Franatic Wolfgang

Franatic Wolfgang
Fixed and Updated! :)

5FRANATIC WOLFGANG Empty Re: FRANATIC WOLFGANG Mon Apr 21, 2014 2:59 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
So, auto respect gained for lack of complaining, so that's a good thing ^-^

All I ask is you expand a little more on your magic, description, strengths, and weaknesses. Just add what else you may be able to do, it's flexibility, and what it can't be capable of doing and ways to stop it more easily than others. These are just suggestions to help you along. Hopefully you can get something going from there that can help to add to what you can and can't do with the magic.

Bump when edited. Please and thank mew~ =3

6FRANATIC WOLFGANG Empty Re: FRANATIC WOLFGANG Tue Apr 22, 2014 4:25 am

Franatic Wolfgang

Franatic Wolfgang
Fixed and Updated!  :jackiewhat: 

7FRANATIC WOLFGANG Empty Re: FRANATIC WOLFGANG Thu Apr 24, 2014 12:06 am

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Sorry, kinda had a lazy day today.. Approved!

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