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1Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Mon Feb 17, 2014 11:49 pm

Raina L. Dawne Scylar

Raina L. Dawne Scylar

   Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Vocalo10
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   "My magic comes from my heart, and so does my strength!"
   

Name(s): Raina Lynna Dawne Scylar
Nickname(s): Angel, Princess
Age: 18
Sex: Female
Birthday: 16/ April / X761
Sexuality: Straight
Class: Cleric
Alignment: Lawful Good
Rank: D Class
Guild: Blue Pegasus
Guild Tattoo: Left Hand
Face Claim: Vocaloid, Megurine Luka

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 5'4
Weight: 115 Lbs.
Hair: Long down to her knees and Bubblegum Pink
Eyes: Crimson Red (but still blind)
General Appearance: Raina is a short but lean girl with a decent size bust, and a athletic body. Years of training has given her arms and legs definition, but not body builder muscles. Her body is trained with physical prowess, and mental strength.

Her eyes look of wisdom and kindness, but are contrasted by the fiery crimson they express. Some people refer to her eyes are a sign of her determination. Her hair rains down her back like a waterfall, falling to just under her knees. It is a shade of bright pink and gives a sense of royality.

Raina normally wears a white bady doll dress with a golden ornamental belt around the waist. A long white fingerless glove is on her right arm and is contrasted by the golden winged bracers that go up it. She wears pink stockings and short white boots. A White bow is normally seen in her hair sometimes pulling it into a ponytail.

Raina constantly likes to wear bright colors and frilly dresses, believing that she as a woman can do anything a man can do, but while wearing a dress. She hates to wear pants. Her signature colors are white, gold, pink, and red.

While on the beach she wears a two piece bikini that is red, white, and frilly. Along her arms and legs are bracelets that shimmer with the water and sunshine.

When she is enduring a harsh weather that makes her cold, she wears a long red cloak and long boots instead of her regular shoes.

Extra: Is an Angel

III. PERSONALITY

Personality: Raina is a kind, bubbly, girl who hates to be mean or rude to anyone living being. The kind of girl that just has to make everyone feel better, whether she has to hug or tackle others to do it. She is a lover of magic and life in general. Even with her constant need to be kind, Raina is no pushover. She has a strong sense of justice and love for her friends and family. With a strong determination, only matched by her high intelligence, she faces any challenges thrown her way. Raina can be the most loyal friend you may have or the worst rival to face. She is not afraid to fight for what she believes in and will not give up, even if it means giving up her life. Raina presents a level of love and adornment for every living being, whether it be ally or enemy. She often apologizes for having to fight her enemies, wishing there was another way.

Her love for everything is a great trait to her personality but can also be her greatest weakness if exploited correctly. Her high sense of morality, has had her deemed the title "The Princess". She hates to cause  any bloodshed, and wishes to solve issues through talking first if she can. But if she can't do not think she will won't fight for what she believes in. Raina is highly respected member of society due to her confidence and attitude towards challenges. She is often seen helping the others believing they own abilities and strength. She is also seen planting new flowers and caring for stray animals through out the city, expressing her love for living things. Raina can not tell a lie to save her life. She believes it is not kind to deceive anyone and hates when people do it to her. She is not afraid to explain the issues of lying to fellow person.

Raina gets along with others very well, but that does not mean she's a sheep. If she deems the need for her step up and help the leader in any way she will take it. And if there is no leader, she herself will stand up and take control when needed. She can be a very gentle but tough leader.

Raina's personality comes from her life throwing her so many curve balls. Losing her family at such a young age has made her sheltered with her feelings. Sure she will be happy but it will take a lot of trust and love to crack the shell guarding her heart. But once that shell is removed you will never find a more loyal companion. A companion that would even die to protect the ones she loves. She once even jumped in front of a stray magic attack to protect a squirrel. This girl has is sweet as sugar and can even cause diabetes (joke). But make her angry and she will make you pay. Independence and spunky can also describe her.

Likes:

  • Music
  • Art
  • Cooking
  • Chess

Dislikes:

  • Evil
  • Mean People
  • Stairs
  • Bad tasting food



Motivations: Her compassion: Raina has an incredible heart that can show love and affection to anyone. It's that love that drives her to protect the ones who cannot protect themselves.
Fears:

  • Lose of a Loved One: Losing her family and friends due to them sending her to "man's world" has caused Raina to fear losing someone she holds dear to her heart.
  • Not be accepted: Raina is shy among the humans to a point that she is deathly afraid of their prejudice.

Positive Traits:


  • Blind-Fight (+4): You know how to fight in melee without being able to see your foes.

    Alertness (+2): You have finely tuned senses.

    Blindsight (+4): Using senses such as acute hearing and sensitivity to vibrations, you detect the location of opponents who are no more than five feet away from you. Darkness and Invisibility are irrelevant, though you cannot detect non corporeal beings.

    High Society (+2): You know good manners and were trained to handle social interactions in noble circles. This is useful in requests involving members of the highest levels of society, such as monarchs, nobles, courtiers, lords and ladies, and high-ranking clerics.

    Fortitude (+3): You are tougher than normal. You can take more hits than the regular Joe.

    Diehard (+2): You can remain conscious after attacks that would fell others.


Negative Traits:


  • Trusting (-2): You don't like to believe that other people are capable of misleading and lying to you. After all, people are basically good, right?
  • Righteous (-1): The end justifies the means. You are willing to perform morally repugnant actions in order to achieve noble goals. Unfortunately, this can alienate those people who might support your cause if you didn't use such heavy-handed methods.
  • Overzealous (-1): You are incapable of having a weak opinion. Everything you believe, you believe as if your life depended on it. Everything you don't believe in, you hate with a passion.
  • Dark Secret (-1): You have some sort of secret that, if revealed, would make you an outcast amongst your society and companions. While this secret is on your mind at all times, it will come up in topics only once in a while, but when it does, watch out! (Raina's dark secret is that her magic can be unstable in cases of extreme fear. If someone was to cause her to be afraid her magic can not work or may even hurt herself.)
  • Squeamish (-1): You don't want anyone's blood on your hands. It's perfectly okay to get blood on your underling's hands, but you don't like to do the deed yourself. Of course, you don't always follow up on things to make sure the job actually gets done--after all, the sight of blood has always disturbed you.
  • Blindness (-3): You are completely blind, and fail all rolls that involve vision. You also suffer the normal penalties for blindness. You were born without the capacity to see (whether or not you actually have eyes is up to you), and therefore can never be healed.
  • Compulsive Honesty (-2): You cannot tell a lie, nor can you behave in a deceitful fashion. You tend to be blunt rather than tactful, even if it means insulting someone who you and your companions are trying to impress.
  • Curiosity (-1): You're a naturally curious person and you find mysteries of any sort irresistible. In most circumstances, alas, your curiosity overrides your common sense.
    This forces you to investigate something unusual, even if it looks like it might be dangerous.
  • Proud (-1): You don't like accepting help from others. If a gift or offer of aid smacks of charity or pity even the slightest bit, you grow indignant and refuse it.
  • Merciful (-1): For a villain, you have a terrible weakness--you don't like to hurt people. Given the choice, you'd rather exile your deposed brother to another country than do him in. Whether this is because you want him to live knowing that you beat him, or whether you just have a small soft spot down in your heart somewhere, the result is the same: your enemies keep coming back again and again.
  • Cautious (-1): You are uneasy engaging in behavior that carries a chance of failure. You must spend twice as long performing any skill that requires an action. For example, deciphering a page of text would take 2 minutes for you instead of 1.
  • Shy (-1): You are distinctly ill at ease when dealing with people, and you try to avoid social situations whenever possible. When you become the center of attention you freeze. Don't expect to make any public speeches.
  • Allergies (-1): You are afflicted with allergies. These may be something as simple as hay fever, but the reactions to such will result in something like a huge bout of sneezing and gasping. You must mention this allergy in your character application. (Raina has a slight allergy to hay that causes her to sneeze. )

IV. MAGIC

Magic: Seraphim
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: A magic lost to humans that utilizing the power of holy light, hope, and compassion. A magic that excels at support and healing spells but with some offensive spells as well. The magic draws it's power from the feelings of the angel's heart.
Strengths: Support Spells, Flying Magic (at a rank and above), Shields, Healing Spells, some offensive spells, Versatility  
Weaknesses: More Support and Healing than Attacking, Dark Magic

V. HISTORY

History: Eighteen years ago a miracle was born to the Angel King Raphael. His wife gave birth to twin daughters, the first children actually birthed to the angels in two hundred years. The daughters were polar opposites in terms of strengths. Aria, the older of the two, possessed great strength and control of dark light, and Raina, the youngest, possessed great magic abilities, and control of holy magic. The daughters were his pride and joy and the kingdom rejoiced experiencing a wave of peace that lasted for 5 years. Raina was born with an unusual trait, she was blind and had eyes the shade of crimson. As the girls grew so did their personalities and knowledge. Raina was taught many different things about magic and life, while her sister craved power.

Raina grew up with her disability and learned to manage with it. She thought of it as a gift, not a hindrance or curse. She trained her body to move fast and effectively while she trained her other senses to levels above normal to compensate for her lack of sight. Her melee skills also increased through her training. Even with the lack of eye sight, she still managed to learn how to locate her targets and take them down effectively.

Raina grew up very loving and caring. Even the loneliest of angels and beings could feel her compassion and warmth. it radiated from her like the sun itself and embraced all who felt it. Her heart and love was well known across the many angelic clans. Many came from across the heavens just to get a sight of her and feel the warmth she radiated. Like a shell of light that surrounds the hearts of the people, perfect for the next in line for the throne.

Her life was heaven, her parents loved her and doted her like she was the center of the world, and this caused issues with Aria. The jealous stormed inside her sister like a fire burning down a forest. The day of the twin's eighteenth birthday, Aria hatched a plan. She attacked her parents and tried to steal their magic and life essence before turning her sights on her sister. Raina knew if she did not defend her self she would be killed and Aria would be unstoppable. She raised her hands and blasted her sister with all the energy she focused incapacitating her. She quickly rushed to her parents side where they made her promise to go to the world of the humans for safety. They gave her a rosary charm and sent her on her way.



Last edited by RainaLynn on Thu Feb 20, 2014 6:15 pm; edited 5 times in total

2Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Tue Feb 18, 2014 8:01 am

Alyssa Strauss

Alyssa Strauss
Hello Raina,

I'll be reviewing your application today.

Instead of assuming the role of Final Character Approval Moderator, I will be taking the role of the review moderator.

The first thing that I see is that you have +15 in positive traits but -17 in negative traits. You need to balance that out dear. Secondly, you must state what your dark secret is in the negative traits of the character application. Give specific examples. Please keep in mind that flying spells can only be used by Mages that are B-Rank and above.

After the corrections are made, bump and another moderator will review this in my stead. Good luck and Godspeed.

Yours,

Alyssa

3Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Tue Feb 18, 2014 9:03 am

Raina L. Dawne Scylar

Raina L. Dawne Scylar
Bump and I won't make a flying spell till B rank. Thanks :)

4Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Tue Feb 18, 2014 3:11 pm

Alyssa Strauss

Alyssa Strauss
Hello Raina,

You used Overzealous twice in the negative traits section. Please edit that and then bump for final approval.

Yours,

Alyssa

5Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Tue Feb 18, 2014 4:14 pm

Raina L. Dawne Scylar

Raina L. Dawne Scylar
Bump!

6Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Wed Feb 19, 2014 10:01 pm

Raina L. Dawne Scylar

Raina L. Dawne Scylar
Bump??

7Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Thu Feb 20, 2014 5:29 am

Alyssa Strauss

Alyssa Strauss
Approved for final review.

8Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Thu Feb 20, 2014 7:58 am

Raina L. Dawne Scylar

Raina L. Dawne Scylar
Bump for final approval! :P

9Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Thu Feb 20, 2014 12:14 pm

Sayuri

Sayuri
Hello, Scylar.

- Explain your motivation.
- Add that Darkness Magic is a weakness of Seraphim Magic.
- Flying spells can be used by mages of A-class and above.
- Your username will be changed to Raina L. Dawne Scylar once it is approved.

10Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Thu Feb 20, 2014 6:17 pm

Raina L. Dawne Scylar

Raina L. Dawne Scylar
Bump!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

11Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Fri Feb 21, 2014 9:47 pm

Raina L. Dawne Scylar

Raina L. Dawne Scylar
Bumpity Bump Bump!

12Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Sat Feb 22, 2014 5:43 pm

Raina L. Dawne Scylar

Raina L. Dawne Scylar
bumped for final approval?

13Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Empty Re: Scylar, Raina Lynna Dawne Sat Feb 22, 2014 7:11 pm

Tali Zorah

Tali Zorah
A thousand apologies for the long delay. Approved.

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